 merrherr 2009-11-06 . chapter 1 i LOVE THIS! i love this tv show and daniel and lindsay AH:) |
 Lucifer's Garden 2009-11-05 . chapter 1It breaks my heart that this show was cancelled so early on :(. This fic helped deal with the pain, of course! Daniel and Lindsay were so obviously gonna end up together, one way or another. ;)
Great piece! You nailed the characters perfectly. |
 Sweeter 2009-10-07 . chapter 1Aww. I so ship this. Lol, we watch Freaks and Geeks in personal planning. It kinda makes me feel better about gr. 8 that they're life sucks and mine doesn't |
 slamothecow 2009-09-19 . chapter 1 This was a good story! I think that you did a nice job of really bringing Lindsay and Daniel to life. I was able to visualize the characters every step of the way. Even if they did break character somewhere in the middle, you did enough to capture your audience at the begining that you made it believable.
I think that the story would have fit in well with the TV show, but i don't think that they would have ultimately ended up together. Given Daniel's character (and even Lindsy's for that matter) everything would have gone well while on the road but once they return to Chippewaw things would have become uncomfortable and weird untill the show would have introduced a new character to the show. a good example of this would be Dawson and Joey from Dawsons creek.
All in all i hope you continue, and I look forward to more work from you. |
 midnighthorrors 2009-09-09 . chapter 1This is BRILLIANT!! And I completely agree with you, Lindsey and Daniel would, and should, have ended up together. Great story!! |
 Mari 2009-09-03 . chapter 1 Write more, please. :) |
 Dolor Sit Amet 2009-09-01 . chapter 1I think they're in character, but I wish there was another chapter. :)
I wouldn't worry too much about keeping these guys in character though. They're the kind of people who just say what they will. They are, in fact, teenagers.
It's what we do. |
 LolaLollipop85 2009-08-01 . chapter 1OMG! You are in my head! I love the chapter and hope that you write more. Lindsay and Daniel SHOULD HAVE been together! |
 venuspluto67 2009-08-01 . chapter 1 I think you did a great job of keeping the characters in character. And it never occured to me that Kowchevski's comment about Daniel could be construed to mean that the middle-aged math-teacher actually finds Daniel attractive! |
 Amanda 2009-07-04 . chapter 1 The problem is, that if Lindsay and Daniel would never have ended up together had you kept them in character. Lindsey would not have done that to Kim. If Lindsay and Daniel had been together, it would have tore at the dynamic of the group. Daniel is too promiscuous for Lindsay, anyway. |
 Lauren 2009-07-01 . chapter 1 This story is intruiging. I would like to know why Lindsay got in the car and what prompted driving off. I also want to know what happened in the last year. I really liked the interaction around the math cheating incident. I didn't read Lindsay and Daniel as being out of character. I think you've been too critical of yourself there. I hope you continue with this story, but I also think it stands as a one shot. I enjoyed this story, thanks for posting. |
 Kareena 2009-07-01 . chapter 1 Hi!This is a great story!I hope you do continue.I love the cute interaction and sarcasm between Lindsay and Daniel.Well done!You did stay in character.I love this "new" Daniel where he is so adorable and charming.They look so good together! |