this is a really fun story. I love the way it is written!

haha, that was a great little story. especially the ending when jeff caught them all, and they were acting like nuaghty kids.

great story, hope you write more like it,

blacky xox

A delightfully entertaining and satisfying tale, my dear. The normal family dynamics came as a light relief - everybody loves reading about brotherly interactions - and who could resist smiling at the unexpected ending? It's good to see that other authors also view Jeff as being the easy-going, playful type of father and not the formal, upright commander 24/7. Having the Tracy patriarch jump into the pool to join his boys added that extra something to the mood of the story.

Great story. Thanks for posting.

We're in winter at the moment, so it's hard to remember what it's like to be this hot and muggy, but I've been there. The only difference is that I didn't go swimming in the middle of the night... with or without the Tracys. (Although WITH sounds a lot more interesting. Imagine nearly drowning and needing the kiss of life. *sigh*)

Good, entertaining story.

FAB
:-) Purupuss

Aw, gotta say I loved this one. All of the brothers eventually ending up in the pool to unwind and actually being joined by theier father in the end.

Genuinely thought I was just going to read a quick fanfic and move on. Instead I found myself grinning and unable to walk away without reviewing.

In light of the heat and humidity that I'm currently experiencing, I found myself able to identify with the Tracy boys. The need to cool down is soon overtaken by the sense of sibling fun and that's something I can recognise and emphasises the relationship between these boys. Necessity and fun mingled together.

Nice little story but it begs one question. As Jeff and all five boys were in the pool, who was in Thunderbird 5?

Brilliant, that was beautifully written with wonderful imagary. I loved every moment.
Well done.
TBZ

Wonderful little story, Loopstagirl. Looking forward to more from you.