Oh. What a position for Lelouch to be in. Goodness, gone after by a mugger. It was interesting seeing his thought process in this really interesting window of time when he doesn't remember who he is.

Excellent way to start this. Starting with Lelouch's prized asset, than a different kind.

Kallen's irritation was quite funny. Particularly the 'gentleman' thing.

Also an excellent end

Whoo! Somebody's on a roll ;D

Keep em coming! D

Really good, you should write more, you explained their emotions very well.

I liked it. It was cute but kind of surprising that Kallen was able to hide the fact that she was a girl.

"like some kind of exotic dish that didn’t taste quite right"

I laughed at that.

It was nice. But, I wonder how Lelouch didn't notice that she was a girl, with her um...rather big 'assets', and how Lelouch could count footsteps while there's a knife pressed to his back.