I just have to ask--did you get the name Aleka Pappas from the Stargate director Alex Pappas, or is that just a coincidence?

Loving the Joe!fic so far; Kavan Smith is amazing and I hope he's in the back half of Season 2.

I like your use of the term 'typicals'

Helen talking about Ashley and Henry like that was both priceless and so classic Helen. ha!

IS there going to be a follow up? I think that'd be niffy!

And *this* is why I don't like religion brought into stories. The Bible *is* a book of love, but it doesn't *say or condone* what that pastor just did. And even the NT is clear on that point. As well as many others.

Nice start!

I'm not so sure Will would be quite so forward with the information, but it does move the story.

:S Using the term superpower reminded me of what Ben B said his place on the SG-1 team was "Mitchell's superpower is getting beat up." :(

Also Will mentioned his ability to make connections. I thought that was developed - self-taught at a young age. He's not an abnormal. At least I hope not... I *can* be learned,though I'd imagine the effectivenes of an adult learning it - after the thought processes are set - would be lessened.

Enjoying the story. :) Well-beta'd.

What a delightful (and somewhat creepy) read. You played Joe well as a character (go Kavan!).

So, was the Perry for Admiral Perry, or The Fridge? And Commissioner Grayson? At that name, I immediately thought of Barbara Gordon Grayson (wishful thinking, but hey!) which could be totally off...

Thanks for such a great story.