very well written, except for what's obviously the spell-check errors. i say continue.

I say you continue, people seem to like it, so why not? Besides, decent Final Fantasy V fanfiction is hard to track, hell, I haven't seen any before. How you write is awesome, I like the descriptions. Very much so :]
Continue dearest Moogle, Whisper wants you to very muchly ;3
PS
Interested in Job Class Change, zomfg do job classes like in that video on your Bartz profile 8D
XD

It's nice to finally see a FFV novelization finally in the works. Well one that's recent rather. You do generally carry thoughts well on, and your spelling is very good. And I know your pain of spell check being a prick when you write stories. It's like Square WANTED people to not be able to spell their character's names.

Oh, I just want to thank everyone here for the kindest reviews ^^ I'm glad my writing is able to please people, and I am aiming for better if that is possible ^^ Heh, and I do hope I can characterise the cast with good depth and personality that will keep people reading...
Thanks for the reviews guys! ^__^

Nee~<3

Firstly I must say, this is simply amazing. I love the way you've described everything, especially colour wise, it literally helps me picture everything in my head. (:
Secondly, ( more decription remarks e~ o.o ) I like how you've shown how the characters feel in their actions, or the way their fecial expression is set, it just helps get the feel of everything :3

I generally love everything about it, if I'm honest, simply because it is well written, and the amount of description is perfect ( To me anyway 8D ), and it is just so good, cotinuee~<3

Amazing. Just simply AMAZING. Now that my personal opinion is out the way, an honest opinion.
No spelling mistakes, Excellent grammar. Wonderful plot. OK so it's an exact copy of the game, only better fleshed out, but who says that's a bad thing?
It's not perfect, but compared to most fanfiction I've seen, it's a Godsend.
9.8 out of ten. Amazing.

Hey. Wooble Fairy here, from dA! Sorry I hardly get on there, just been busy.
But, anyways, I've read your story like you asked and I'm happy to see a FFV fanfic, I've searched and never seen them before XD Nice to see you try and boost its rep. It's good, I like your descriptions and how the opening is a little bit different from the game. I can't wait to see how you portray the rest of the cast, will you give 'em more backbone? And will there really be Boko/Koko!? I love that pairing! xD
Looking forward to the rest, especially to see Faris! Hope you can do pirate speak! Well, chat ya laters!
~WoobleFairy