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BreyerRose
2009-10-09 . chapter 6
so this story keeps getting better & better. i loved this chapter, it was amazing. the john drinking like a girl thing totally cracked me up lol. & thank god john came to his senses, i was a lil worried there. you've def made randy a great villian... i dobut he's gonna give up so easily. i cannot wait for your next update ^-^
rozewain
2009-10-08 . chapter 6
oh please don't stop there~!
please continue~!
please~!
Hysteriskpigebarn
2009-10-07 . chapter 6
OMG! I LOVED this chapter! The hole story is just so catching! You can't stop reading.. But omg i laughed my ass of when i read chapter 6 ! SO FUNNY! And not just funny! But also exiting and sweet and... AND I JUST GOT IT ALL! Please update soon!! LOVELOVELOVE ON YOU!
Hysteriskpigebarn
2009-09-21 . chapter 5
This is the best story i have ever read! PLEASE write some more! Please please!! I want to hear what happens to Mike, John and Randy! And don't you dare give up on this story! It's SO cute! More please :D!
Renna33
2009-08-25 . chapter 5
aw, Randy that SNAKE! Poor John and poor Mike, you're right, this amnesia thing SUCKS! Update soon!
BreyerRose
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
omg... i didn't want to think that randy had a hand in this, but when he showed up on john's doorstep it seemed a little fishy.

the way you wrote the interaction between john & mike is amazing. i love that you added mike's familiar mannerisms in for john to notice. your eye for details really makes this awesome. it's so cute that 'the miz' got excited when he heard he was a wrester :) i can't wait to see else unfolds.
Renna33
2009-08-20 . chapter 4
uh oh...update soon!
TheMizMagnet
2009-08-13 . chapter 3
I like this story... a lot. I do. It's so sad, but so touching at the same time. Poor John.. has to put up with Miz forgetting him. But hey, at least Randy's there to help! Awesome job.

2009-08-13 . chapter 3
D'aw. I can't wait to see where this goes. I love your writing, and this pairing is really growing on me.
CodyRhodesFan
2009-08-12 . chapter 3
John wasn’t sure if he wanted to let Randy in or throw his ass off his doorstep.

Lol!

I never expected it to be Randy. Seriously.

And poor Mizzy.

And John's grief is something everyone can relate to. I'd be like that if my boyfriend lost his memories about me...that's sad.

John's thoughts are still to that...of course, it is...poor John...

UPDATE!

I must know what happens to Mike.
CodyRhodesFan
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
MIKE DOESN'T REMEMBER JOHN!
Now, this is going to be great.
I can just feel it in me.
I didn't think he'd wake up when I read the beginning but he's awake now!
And I love John's misery.
CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Update.
CodyRhodesFan
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Brain Damage?
MIKE?!
Oh My God.
When he got hit, I didn't think it would be so serious to brain damage...
And the way you discribed him in the hospital. Poor Mike. I love angst. I love what draws them both together in this one. I just love it. :)
Must go read the next chapter!
no name
2009-07-23 . chapter 2
WOW! great story ; ) please update soon! i can't wait for the next chapter!
HearMeNow.x
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
OH GOD!
D:

he can't remember.
oh my god.

this is sad already.

update soon!
BreyerRose
2009-07-08 . chapter 2
uh oh... he doesn't rmemeber john. this is really well written, i like your writing style. the plot is great, i love these 2 togehter & you write them well. i can't wait to see how john handles this. poor mike. it must be awful. great job ^-^
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