no not another ciffie. please update again soon!
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Hi

A good update!
I really enjoyed it.

One thing you should know, when a plane goes down the pilots slow down the plane, the engines get quieter, you got it right with the Landing gear but cargo in the hold is secured so it should just be as gentle.

I can't wait for more, I'd love to know where they landed!
Please update soon
Beywriter

yay! they're almost free but I know better than to hope they'll stay that way ;) update again soon please!
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Cow tipping... Stalin... a wondrous combination, really. I chortled a few times as well, I might add.

Good show, old chap.

OH FINE IF I DON'T HAVE TO KILL MYSELF AFTER TODAY I WILL. D:

I woke up, found this in my inbox, and rejoiced a little bit. Now maybe I can get through at least geometry and maybe French. ...Now I'll probably be late for school today, but I can't really say I'm awake enough to care.

I <3 Spencer. His lack of English is awesome--I love non-natives.

Why such bashing of rednecks, huh? Redneck bars are awesome--less pedophiles, more barfights. ...Then again, Kai's an idiot. He wouldn't know such things.

How the hell are Kevin and Bryan going to get out of this one? Macy am intrigued now. D: And Bryan with his stupid grin. Classic.

Awesome as ever (good lord you make me feel so inferior D:)
~Macy

Hi

Well this isn't going well.
Stuck in a dog cage in the cargo hold of a plane.
I have no idea what there gonna come accross...but its not gonna be good.

Please update soon
Beywriter

*bangs head on the desk until blood is gushing out of my ears* I'M SO SORRY I HAVEN'T UPDATED IN FOREVER AND I'M A HORRIBLE PERSON AND STOP UPDATING SO I CAN GET MY FIC BACK ON TRACK! D:

Bryan would be an awesome kidnap-buddy. Kevin is just panicking and making a nuisance of himself. Annoying little monkey.

I still need to upload my Raul deathfic. Damn and fuck it all. D:<

Awesome as always, (DON'T UPDATE ANYMORE)
~Macy

Ah! evil cliffie! And they've got Kevin no less! please update again soon, this is such an awesome sequel!
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Hi

Well that was a...freaky ending.
Bryan and Spencer couldn't even protect Kevin!

They should have used their bits, they would have got to the metal spider thingy faster riding them.

Please update soon
Beywriter

Not lame! Lol!
I think it was good. Kind of weird at the beginning, but dreams are always weird:D

I hope Bryan doesn't die though... I like him:(

xoxox

yay an update! I can't wait to read more. well done!
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Even if today completely sucks and makes me lose my faith in all humanity, I'll be okay because of this? I hope... (btw, it's 5:15 am right now, so pardon the suckishness of this review in advance, please...)

Lee's dad made me smile. ^^ The smoking, the 1930s-ish study, the reading...all of it just made him more and more awesome.

Yeesh, Kai really can hold a grudge. Eh, boys and their toys, I suppose. O.o And how the hell did he get to where Max and Tyson are? ...I mean, -when- the hell did he get to where Max and Tyson are? (my review forming portion of the brain is shorting out, I'll have to cut this short)

AND WHY THE HELL DID YOU BREAK MY MAXIE'S ARM? WHY?

*blinks* Ahem. Well. That was unexpected, even for me.

Before you are any further exposed to my early morning insanity, I'll just be going now. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
~Macy

I bet he gets Psoriasis.

Kai the schizo.

Nice ring to it, really.

I also love how you make Tyson's inability to hold a direction more announced. Very well done.

Hi

Well its obvious to say "its a trap".
Because thats what it is.
I hope there extra careful

Please update soon
Beywriter