Love it, Love it Love it!
Loved the whole batman / superman together.
Loved superman getting some of his powers from Jason.
Loved the turnabout of powers between batman and superman.
Loved that you turned Richard into a hero.
Loved the idea that he was still infected with kryptonite.
Great story. Would love to see the movie!!

As I said elsewhere this was one of the best stories I have read. It kept you guessing and on your seat chapter after chapter. I could easily see this as a major movie. It is that good. Wish the people in charge would read it. They could forget all those other writers and start to prep this for film tomorrow.

I hope the Batman fans that were giving you a hard time check back otherwise it is just their loss.

Thanks for sharing this.

Wow, that was fast. I almost feared I'd have to wait for the awesomeness to be updated. Thank you for improving my day and giving me hope for the future of movies. I will vote for you when the time comes for the next superman movie. (^-^) I absolutely enjoyed every minute of reading this and want to complement you on keeping the characters perfectly in character with excellent dialogue. I also loved the little references to the comics/animated series all throughout that most superhero movies leave out. Thank you for sharing your talent.

I hope Batman is under deep cover of some sort, 'cuz I"m too much of a fan of the character to handle him acting like this for much longer...

Ah is in shock.

Like I said I will leave detailed review at the Planet site.

Cliffhanger!?! No! Please tell me that you'll update soon? I absolutely love this story. The dialogue has the perfect balance of comedy and seriousness. And everything just jumps off the page. I really, really need to know what happens next. Please, please, please update soon.

Ah again I did not see this coming. Oh no...now I have to wait for what comes next.

Bruce...give it back...give it back.

Man a surprise at every turn. Continues on.

Alfred is not the only one dumbstruck. Also enjoyed the scene with Jason and James at the school. So wonder just how many secrets they will share.

Still wonder about Jason and Clark's relationship. Hope it improves. He sould be old enough now to realize just what Superman did for Richard and cut him a break.

Ha ha I had to come over here when I noticed more of the story posted here. This continues the greatness factor.

I will give a detailed review when posted at the Planet. Promise.

The plot thickens...=] Love the elevator music =] I couldn't stop from rolling over laughing at Bruce's overexaggerated charade. These two chapters are awesome! I can't believe Bruce would fire Alfred though...the presumptuous prick D= he better not be gone for good!! Please update!!

Yay, I was so excited to see this story and I read the first six chapters in a row last night. I loved the story before this, it was the only screenplay on I've ever liked enough to read past the first few paragraphs. I'm glad you're writing in this genre again!

Interesting how this story is developing! I expected Supes and Batman to meet and instantly team up or something, not for them to actually become rivals! I particularly like the conversations Clark had with Lois and Jason after the fight. It's incredible how much detail you put in this without being able to show what the characters are thinking (as in a story).

Looking forward to the rest of this!

btw, why do you have two of the same story up here?

Great stuff on these two chapters, seriously great dialogue for each character and each of their personalities are true to the characters. Keep it up cuz all of it is great to read.

Great work and dialogue. Smooth transitions and great attention to detail. Keep it up.