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Kate Jones 47
2009-10-11 . chapter 7
Great Job! Keep writing the fic...not many people write Alias fics anymore and I love to see new ones out there! So yeah keep up the good work!
sarkney
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
I love it! Keep writing awesome chapters.
Stephanida
2009-08-17 . chapter 7
I've been away for two weeks and it looks like I've missed two chapters!
So, what can I say? I like your idea of Vaughn and Weiss working as double agents. The fact that they still don't know that Sydney hasn't really been brainwashed only adds to the intrigue. I loved Irina's reappearance in this chapter and I really like the idea that Sark is still covertly working for her.
The only two things that I didn't like (and please, take it only as a friendly piece of constructive criticism :)):
1) I don't think Kendal would apologise to Sydney. He just has a completely different personality. He is more likely to rant and tell her to get the hell out of there than quietly apologise and do everything to placate her. :)
2) Irina not knowing something that concerns her daughter? Not very likely. But, she might play her "I had no idea" card with Sark, so who knows? :)
Otherwise, great chapters. I'll be waiting for the next installment. :)
ali
2009-08-13 . chapter 7
sweet spy mommas back im hoping she aint going to be to evil ha
doves1993
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
Another great chapter I can't wait to see what happens and I am still hopping it will turn out S/V but I really don't care. Please update soon.
Stephanida
2009-08-01 . chapter 5
Thanks for the quick update. It was so good to see Sark and Sydney together, even if they were just arguing. :)
There were many good quotes in this one:
- Sark felt the sudden urge to protect her, to take her tormenting pain away and to kill Michael Vaughn. Well, the last wish wasn’t something all that new,...
- “You might not believe me, but I promise you, I won’t tell on you. But I want you to do something for my silence.”- “Who saw that coming? Spill you son of a **!”
Nicely written dialogue there! :)
And the intrigue grows... Sydney is now the head of one of the Covenant cells? And what are Weiss and Vaughn doing there?
All in all, a very good chapter!
Stephanida
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
He called her Sydney at the end of the chapter. :)
Good job. Please, continue. I will be waiting for your updates. :)
friend9810
2009-07-16 . chapter 3
Great story! I really like Sarkney but I also like Syd and Vaughn together. Hope you update soon :)
ali
2009-07-08 . chapter 3
loving the story so far any chance of irina being in it i always wondered what it would be like if they met when sydney was potraying julia i wondered if irina would be shocked or if she would like her daughter to be a bit darker
Halle Alexis
2009-07-07 . chapter 3
hope you'll continue, i like it.
doves1993
2009-07-07 . chapter 3
Great story I can't wait for more chapters and i really hope that in the end you decide to have Syd and Vaughn end up together instead of Syd and Sark. For some reason I hate Sarkney Please update soon.
JENJEN87
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
really good job with the Alias story. i have read your Instant star stories and think that you are a great writer i can't wait to read more.
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