 Kate Jones 47 2009-10-11 . chapter 7Great Job! Keep writing the fic...not many people write Alias fics anymore and I love to see new ones out there! So yeah keep up the good work! |
 sarkney 2009-10-04 . chapter 7 I love it! Keep writing awesome chapters. |
 Stephanida 2009-08-17 . chapter 7I've been away for two weeks and it looks like I've missed two chapters!
So, what can I say? I like your idea of Vaughn and Weiss working as double agents. The fact that they still don't know that Sydney hasn't really been brainwashed only adds to the intrigue. I loved Irina's reappearance in this chapter and I really like the idea that Sark is still covertly working for her.
The only two things that I didn't like (and please, take it only as a friendly piece of constructive criticism :)):
1) I don't think Kendal would apologise to Sydney. He just has a completely different personality. He is more likely to rant and tell her to get the hell out of there than quietly apologise and do everything to placate her. :)
2) Irina not knowing something that concerns her daughter? Not very likely. But, she might play her "I had no idea" card with Sark, so who knows? :)
Otherwise, great chapters. I'll be waiting for the next installment. :) |
 ali 2009-08-13 . chapter 7 sweet spy mommas back im hoping she aint going to be to evil ha |
 doves1993 2009-08-02 . chapter 5Another great chapter I can't wait to see what happens and I am still hopping it will turn out S/V but I really don't care. Please update soon. |
 Stephanida 2009-08-01 . chapter 5Thanks for the quick update. It was so good to see Sark and Sydney together, even if they were just arguing. :)
There were many good quotes in this one:
- Sark felt the sudden urge to protect her, to take her tormenting pain away and to kill Michael Vaughn. Well, the last wish wasn’t something all that new,...
- “You might not believe me, but I promise you, I won’t tell on you. But I want you to do something for my silence.”- “Who saw that coming? Spill you son of a **!”
Nicely written dialogue there! :)
And the intrigue grows... Sydney is now the head of one of the Covenant cells? And what are Weiss and Vaughn doing there?
All in all, a very good chapter! |
 Stephanida 2009-07-31 . chapter 4He called her Sydney at the end of the chapter. :)
Good job. Please, continue. I will be waiting for your updates. :) |
 friend9810 2009-07-16 . chapter 3Great story! I really like Sarkney but I also like Syd and Vaughn together. Hope you update soon :) |
 ali 2009-07-08 . chapter 3 loving the story so far any chance of irina being in it i always wondered what it would be like if they met when sydney was potraying julia i wondered if irina would be shocked or if she would like her daughter to be a bit darker |
 Halle Alexis 2009-07-07 . chapter 3hope you'll continue, i like it. |
 doves1993 2009-07-07 . chapter 3Great story I can't wait for more chapters and i really hope that in the end you decide to have Syd and Vaughn end up together instead of Syd and Sark. For some reason I hate Sarkney Please update soon. |
 JENJEN87 2009-07-01 . chapter 1really good job with the Alias story. i have read your Instant star stories and think that you are a great writer i can't wait to read more. |