Good story. The chapter breaks confused me a little bit. You could have made them a bunch of different chapters (although they were sort of short.)

You kept spelling Dug's name wrong (there's no "o" in it) and that sort of bothered me. Although, I'll admit, it's not as bad as the people who think his name is "Dog".

I actually kept wondering through the whole thing "If this Ivan guy is just like Charles Muntz, does he turn evil in the end like Muntz does?" Because I would think that Carl's view of aviation would have changed a little after his encounter with his "childhood hero". Course, that's just what I think.

Sweet little story. Good job.

Awe. I adored this movie. It was so sweet.
I'm glad ou wrote a FanFiction about it. I love it. :)

This is a great story! I love it! And i feel like this story IS a part of the movie, only written. It fits right in with the rest, and from now on when ever I watch the movie, I will think of this story. :D

WOOW you write alot (thats a good thing in my opinion)
i didnt like the movie but your writing was amazing onort

Aw, what a cute story! I just saw "Up!" last month, so I was curious to see if there were any new fics. At first, I thought that the imaginary friend was a little out of place, but the ending with the puppy made it just right! And yay, Kevin's okay! ^_^

*S. Snowflake

Aww...cute!

absolutely fantastic! i loved it!

Very nice! I liked it a lot!