wow... that was really depressing...

now i get to go to sleep with that story being the last thing i thought about... brilliant...

as depressing as that was, it was a definite surprise, i didn't see that coming at all.

i love how sesshomaru and kagome are going away on what seems to almost be a honeymoon... lol they'd better stock up on the potion from masami-sama... ;)

post soon please!

Sara

oh. my. god.

THAT WAS AMAZING!

i loved it!! it was so hot and passionate!

i need more sesshomaru x kagome scenes! they're orgasmic!! (pun intended)

btw i love how rin asked miroku not to touch her teacher... i was cracking up at that one...

this is definetely this reason why you're my fav author on ...

love it to pieces so far, keep it up!

:D :D :D

Nice, not to thrilled with the whole intimacy between Sesshomaru and Kagome, but I still liked it.

I'm going to keep asking this: When will they find out about the boys!!

And now for the fun part...

Spelling errors:

He -warped- his arms around... Wrapped.

I felt the bed touch the side of -by- knee... my

Instead he held me closer and I felt the bed touch the side of by knee. (We moved.) I looked down... I don't understand importance of these two words.

My hand g`rasped... I don't have to point this one out.

this is a maybe. it's not what i would've expected, but it's good!

this chapter was shorter than the others, but i liked it.

can't wait for some Sesshomaru x Kagome action!

^-^

Interesting. Very interesting.

I found a few spelling errors and sentence problems.

"They had gotten use to Masami being present and didn’t hastate" its hesitate.

There was another one, but I forgot where it is.

But other than that, it was really good.
We get to see what Masami is doing for Sesshomaru, which is nice.

I love the last bit of the chapter the most.
The conversation kills me!

:D

Yum yum yum.

Comment:

""I felt his leg start to shake...""

this part he got me thinking of a rabbit or dog's leg twitching when scratched a certain way... :)

I must agree with Sara, more Sango/Kouga action! :)

This is the image this chapter has given me:

Kagome, holding a blow torch slowly melting away Sesshomaru's icy exterior.

:)

We need more InuYasha/Miroku too!!

I LOVE KAGOME AND SESSHOMARU BEING A COUPLE!

Which is unusual. I usually hate it, but you make it work! I was MELTING during the scene with them!

I am kind of missing the Sanga/Kouga action... I really like that pair as well...

I will love you forever as long as you never stop posting this story!

:D :D :D :D

Sara

When willthey find out about Miroku and InuYasha!!

Though it should be clear at this point about their relationship... I just think I want someone to walk in on them... THAT would be funny.

IT SHOULD BE JAKEN! Holy smokes! That would cause me to die with laughter!

With his imp like stare, he'd probably faint and then wake up screaming hours later, in a completely different room.

Oh yes.

I think we need some I/M action! YUP!

is 42 coming out soon, because its getting really good!

YAY!

Oh this chapter has made me super happy!

Those blasted things are GONE!

Aw! Rin and Shippo are the best!

Shippo choking and Rin helping him.

Now i see Jaken choking and Rin smacking him with a book...

Whats the deal with the tea?

they would make beautiful children. don't tell me when they find out!!

So the boys seem to be having tons of fun. Tons and tons of fun.

When will the others find out?

they should do it in a tree...

they really should... [disturbed]