Well written.

PET PEEVE! Sorry, you just committed one of my pet peeves. When Sesshomaru wrapped his arms around Kagome, you wrote "Two pairs of strong arms pulled her closer." Are there two Sesshomarus? No? Then it should be "Two arms" or "A pair of arms."

Sorry for that. It was a cute story, if an overdone idea. However, it was well written, s.omething I always appreciate

Oh my gosh that was too cute!! I love it when InuYasha's all like what the heck and kagome's all "I love sesshoumaru. ha ha

Well written.
Somewhat OOC but real.
I however, LOVE your avatar.
Drool worthy.

~Ts

Thank you. You managed to have Sesshomaru change, bur still remain the same. It always is 'off' to me when he suddenly starts talking a lot. ^_^

Nothing special but still good story. Keep writing! XD

Sugarland - "Stay" was an amazing song to base this one shot of Sesshomaru and Kagome, it suites Kagome and the love triangle that Inuyasha has formed with her and Kikyou. The way she feels is described in both your story and in the song, it was amazing. Thanks for the link to this story it was really appreciated, I am looking forward to other one shots and stories from you, you have a flare and talent for writing stories/one shots based on songs. You can interpret the meaning behind the songs so easily it seem. Anyways I loved this story and thanks for the link, again.

~Tsukiyomi No Miko~