has a good start but could be longer can't wait for the nest chapter!

Wait, isn't this the story you started a while back and abandoned? The one I wrote that Ozai scene for? I hope it is! That story looked so cool!

I like this prologue. I'm guessing the challenger is Zuko, in the form of the Blue Spirit. w00t!

cool start! looking forward to reading more of this awesome story!

I think I can guess who that is~!

Either it's Zuko, since you're a heavy TophZukoFriend! shipper, or it's Sokka. Because I want it to be. >_>;