THE ANGST! Oh my goodness! I like angst, but cutting's a little too extreme for my tastes. However, you did amazing on the descriptions, succeeded in making me feel ill when he was cutting himself. And you even gave it short little backstory, and for once I ALMOST feel like smacking Roxas for leaving him...even if Akuroku is my ultimate favorite pairing. It still wasn't nice to leave Hayner high and dry and practically elope with Axel.

The ending, although sad, was really good. I like how Seifer cut himself too to prove to Hayner in his own way that he does care about him. It was really well done, great job.

oh no, poor Seifer!

Oh My God that was so SAD! I thought Seifer was totally going to save him...

Shocking! Espetially since I'm a fan for that pairing...

Buut...Sadness makes for good FF! Wonderful job on the story!

Ooh my goddness, NO! D; Noo Hayner, why! See Seifer bleeds for you! Omg no ;_; I love your writing, made me cry because its so good, and because Hayner fell!

Theres gotta be a happy ending, i just know itt!

xP Bx

Oh god... I'm crying too D:

Awesome story.

(can't say anything bad casue she once did a story where Hayner died, then another one where Hay Hay and Seify died)

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:D

Bad Roxy.

Oh nyo! Why must the good die young? DX

omg, I nearly cried. wow, that is powerful. Really.

I'm... going to go cry. Seifer makes me smile... c8 BUT STILL. NO

Holy- That was so sad. I'm already upset and you've just made it worse. *sniffsniff*

Beautiful story, though. Love this, even though it's so sad.

I loved it. I absolutely loved it! Very very sad. Wonderful story! *hugs*