yey the return it's back again yey so awesome:)

More description and I think it's better than the first one :) yeah, the first one left many holes hope this one will be much more better.

By the way, is the pairing still the same? I like Mimato and I love Michi, so both are fine for me :D I just can't stand Taiora... For some unknown reason.

Update 'kay?

haha great re-write :) are you going to re-write the rest of the story?

This is really well-written and I'm extremely intrigued by it. I haven't read the original so I can't wait to read more of this!

hey not bad tho i kind of liked the first one more, but this one is filling in all the info the other one didn't so its still good can't wait to see if this rewrite can best ur original

VERY well written! Sorry for the lateness in this review... I've been meaning to read it ever since you posted it I just haven't had time haha. But I'm so happy you decided to rewrite this story! I enjoyed the original but I have a feeling the rewrite will be WAY better. And just going out on a limb here... will this one have the same pairings as before or are we turning Michi here? :) I think you've converted me to loving Michi just as much as Sorato haha. I hope you update soon!

wow, it was good before bu this is excelent, great job :D

ehh?

i don't think i read ur first story, so i don't really get this

are the guys evil now?

wow. just, wow. this. is. AMAZING! :D plz plz update, cuz this is so cul!

I have to say, definitely, without a doubt, 100% improvement. I liked how you made them only out-of-character enough to fit the story - last time, they seemed so super OOC that it almost took away from the story. Almost.

Another thing is that you went all-out with the descriptions and such. It was definitely more attractive than the first one - and considering how much I enjoyed the first, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for us in the rewrite! Keep up the awesome work, Diane!

I remember this fic of yours, I did read the first version too, I think that was how we met, through this fic of yours because it reminded me of a very old one with this same plotline I did read a long ago

Nice to see you're rewriting it, I loved the first one so this one sure will be really good too

Well, This is the First time that my Engine is running badly from a cold start! lets see if I gain any cylinders, or if my engine will end up the same as list time: A smoldering pile of scrap metal. I guess I'll find out later!

Wow...that was totally different! Holy crapola! That, wow, i am at a loss of words. i could see everything you were saying...wow diane, great job. actually, great cant even describe it! there has o be this knew word i made up. superdoupergreatbeyondperfect! that mite be a mouth full, but wow, that was amazing! great description and everything! cant wait to read the next chapter!

This is going to be intresting. I've never read the original. I think I just might! Then again. Now the question is who's the person at the end? So many questions! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

You're right. This version IS better than the old one...