no offence, but even though i appreciate you have a wild imagination and other stories combine different themes into lord of the rings (AU); but this story makes no real sense. it's frustrating and annoying that the reader has to switch from one POV to another,and the occasional Author's note embedded within the story ... oh and the countless "Dragon language translations". It's off-putting. You have dialogue but that's it. You need more. Goodluck.

lol You had me worried for a minute there! That was an awful lot of time to cover in one chapter, not that I'm complaining, cuz it was really long. :D

And yeah, I don't get on the computer a lot, we only have one, and five users, it's a miracle if I can get anything done...But I know what I'm getting as a combo b-day and x-mas present! ^^ A refurbished mac, so I'll be able to be on as much as I want soon enough!

Thanks for being patient with me!
Bye SE

DDEC

oh!

I am glad you didn't end in a cliffie *pheuw*.

It was a good chapter! But I had to feel sorry for Legolas being swung over his wife's shoulder like that...

I'm sorry about not updating my story...its just I have no time for me because of work, and school and boyfriend (well that really is me time but it is still time consuming.) I just hadn't gotten around to reading or writing many stories lately.

-Rose that Blooms in Secret

awesome!

WTH!? SHE'S DEAD!? that's... that's so not fair.*burts into wailing tears* poor Legolas! And what must Xanroth be feeling?!

SE: woah, LOWER THE DECIBELS!

me: ...sorry.

“Can you protect me from yourself?” Epic quote...

Perhaps Dani's and Dana's grandparents will also help against the threat against Marry and Pippin.

I liked it though :)
DDEC

I like the way you keep giving us snippets from the past - you get to know the characters better!

Heck, if I was Xanroth, I wouldn't have wanted to take her back either! "I need to find myself"? that is so lame. In marriage, people are supposed to learn and love and find themselves together.

And Xanroth is an idiot for not going to look for her! I mean, was he just going to stand there and let her walk away?! Be a man! or in this case Dragon!

I'm not saying I'm not glad they got back together, but really, these people need to get some spine! I liked this chapter, however; I've been wanting to know about Bloom and Xanroth's past for a while.

-Rose that Blooms in Secret

Hi nice to have another episode! Sorry you felt your last chappie got luke-warm reviews, however I think this one is much better! As usual great pace and lots happening. Can't wait to see how it all turns out with the dragons lending a hand.

aw, I didn't do that much. But I will not complain about the 5 Billion cyber credits...m cookies.

Good Job! I'm Boromir survived! and how things will happen differently now that the "board has been reset". haha!

-Rose that Blooms in Secret

E! Loved the chapter ^^ Anyways, about your problem, what I did was sent them a message saying that I was flattered they'd steal my work, and I might have let them use some ideas it they'd ASKED, but I'm reporting you for stealing. Ask before you copy and paste something next time.
And then I reported them ^^

And I think the fic got removed...So that's what I did *shrugs*

DDEC

OMG!1 i RELLY luv ur riting! i wuz SO sad when Darla died! Poor leggy! i cried for him. ur riting wuz juzt SO good!

i juzt thought that u mite want 2 no that thiz relly STUPID is making fun of ur awzum story in HER story. It iz called "The Kiss of a Mary-Sue". The author is "Lilly McShepin". She is juzt SO mean! i juzt thought u mite want 2 no. She wuz making fun of por Darla! A dragunn shuld eat her!

Byez! Luv ur riting!

"NOT THE BEARD!" XD
When all of hell was out, Darla is back and ready for action!
I'm curious to see Xanroth's power in a battle scene.

Keep up the good work.