It's a beautiful piece of writing you have there. I felt awfully sorry for the Pharoah as well as Bakura.. Since I'm already writing this, congrats on your YTAS series... It was really entertaining!

Such a chilling tale...this explores a definite side-effect if Yugi were to truly be gone from the Pharaoh. The bond they share is phenominal (by god, they share the same body), and it's devistating to see it torn asunder as Bakura did.

Writing is beautiflly descriptive as per usual, Little Kuriboh. I look forward to whatever else you choose to write.

Mm. This is just so gripping! You need to become a professionally published author. Your work is just too good, I am so impatient when it comes to the thought of having to wait for more of your lovely writings. You really caputered Yami here, it's just so moving and emotional, I don't know how to explain my feelings towards it. ^^' Regardless, exquisite work. I'm kinda depressed I'm coming to the end of your story list. :( Fall-off-the-edge-of-my-seat-excited, but sad nevertheless. ;P

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Wow. I can safely say that your writing goes above and beyond of what is usually expected in fanfiction. This piece was chilling, and the twist was a highly unexpected, but still wonderfully written, surprise.

It's amazing how you can write both comedy and drama so well! Keep it up :)

All I can say is... Wow. Amazing. I loved it!!
This fandom may be littered with fics that are full OOCness and grammatical errors and whatnot, but you are one of the few people who prove that Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction isn't all bad! It's just harder to find authors that can portray it as well.
I also find it kind interesting that in a sense, Bakura won- he got the Pharaoh to justify his acts!
Bravo Little Kuriboh,
~Sugarfang

Oh my... I have never seen such a sie of you... Very dramatic, very well done my friend. Such tragedy...

A beautifully desperate story...You described it so well, it was as if I was right there watching it happen! It's so true, too; Yami would go mad if Yugi was taken from him, and Bakura (at least the Yami) has always been insane. Very nice job with this! You wrote this amazingly well. :) :D

WOW! Geez, is there anything you can't do!? =) Very well written, LK! Very good wording and the way you set it out was genius. This is one of the very few fanfics I've read where I haven't had something I've had to critique and provide 'constructive criticism' on (I'm rather touchy on the subject of grammar), so congrats on yet another job well done!

I've seen the abridged series and how freely you work with it to make it so funny. And this is certainly a surprise to any fan that has seen your work on the Abridged series and not with your fanfics. Although this is the first one I've read, I must say that it is very wordy. Short, but wordy. Doesn't make any sense...
XO
Anyway, awesome job and I truly think that this is quite marvelous.
I just like blood.
It makes me happy.
^_^

Oh wow, so sad! /sniffles/ Poor guys... Awesome fic! Dark and angsty, who doesn't love some angst sometimes? Awesome, loved it! ^^

incredible. who knew the funniest man could be a amazing writer. i read "spirit" and i would love to say how much i enjoy reading your story, now this beautiful story... wow you truly are talented. i speak now to all please write more dark stories with yami and yugi, coz your stories are outstanding.

Well, that was an unusually gory and grim story for you LK. 0_0

You are one of the most amazing writers I've ever seen. Not just in fanfiction either - fiction in general. You should definitely start writing original stuff. You could make a killing.

Once again, the story made me tear up. It was a heartfelt, emotional, and all around beautiful one-shot. But even with all those words, I can't quite express just how awesome it was.

Many kudos to the amazing LittleKuriboh!

~Maistwin

Wow, I was expecting comedy from you. This is quite poignant and dark! You really got the Pharaoh's angst and Bakura's sadism and made me feel everyone's pain. Well done!

Intense. Wow.