aww, beautiful..

aww so cute!!

nyaw I want to see how it goes :(
that's so sad :(
but very sweet :)
I would love to read more if you update!

-MH-

All right, well it sounds good. I liked the part where he came back at night to see her, being very careful not to hurt her and all.
There could have been more editing in some parts, but otherwise it's pretty good. Keep it up!