...good things? yes? finally happening? wow c:

is this gonna be heartbreakingly sad forever or...? :(

This chapter is your best so far. That part with Cloud and Hojo was incredibly in-character and so, so well-written. Just- the tension! Well done.

I don't know what to think regarding Zack. I mean, he's kind of in limbo in the plot right now, although I like how he interacts with Aerith, Tseng and his inner thoughts.

and omg tifa what now what now

D: Cloud!

This story is so cool! I just really wish that you would update it... is this when Cloud is going to escape? What will happen next? Please update!

There aren't many fics like this and I was happy to find it. Then I was disappointed to find it incomplete. Please finish it, it's such a good plot.

I know that you write for fun, but I really hope that you continue this fic (or any of your others). This is great. I don't think I've read any others where Zach goes back to Midgar, and Cloud attempts to escape by himself. Your writing, characterization, and pacing are all solid and do a fine job of supporting a great story.

Thanks for writing!

"I'll try not to have such a delay this time." That what you said at the end of this chapter THREE YEARS AGO! Why haven't you continued!? This is so GOOD! I get of you, MORE, MORE! This is unfair! I want Zack to find Cloud! They need to get him out of there! Please, FOR THE LOVE OF GAIA1, CONTINUE!

Woo! Keep it up! I always wondered why Zack wasn't saved... I mean, we never see ANY other Soldier Firsts (that I remember) in Crisis Core, so you think they'd want to keep him around (well duh, this is your reasoning in the story...). Nevertheless, I like this a lot! Looking forward to the next chapter, especially now that Cloud's (attempting) a jail break.

I haven't seen this scenario before... Which is awesome! Keep up the good work!

PLLLEEAAAASEE WRITE MORE! I absolutely love your story! I any wait to see what happens next when you come to continue writing this fabulous story!

*sniffsobcry* Why is there no update? :( Well-written and interesting. Poor Cloud! D:

this is a brilliant story. i hope you'll update it sometime soon.

This is awesome awesome AWESOME why have you STOPPED updating it? *big unsmiley face*

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Uhhh so my incoherent rambling aside, I enjoyed reading this so much. Everyone was just so in character and GAWD, this has to be one of the best FF7 fics I have ever read. Why have you stopped? Stop this torture and update please, I beg of you;_;

Great story! Shame it hasnt been updated in three years :(