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beauty0102
2009-08-13 . chapter 3
this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
beauty0102
2009-08-13 . chapter 2
yeah great chapter.
beauty0102
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
yeah great chapter.
My-Friend-KITT
2009-07-26 . chapter 3
How cute and sweet at the same time. :)
My-Friend-KITT
2009-07-26 . chapter 2
OH My Gosh, I laughed all the way through this...excellent!
beauty7890102
2009-07-22 . chapter 3
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
beauty7890102
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
serber
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Ok, that was really cute. I love stories where Lois and Clark just have fun.
Sreya
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
*cracking up* Now THAT is a serious case of late night sillies!
RouthFan
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Fantastic! Every inch of text was absolutely beautiful! It was able to evoke such a strong sense of glee and elation. Just wonderful how you are ALWAYS able to do that.

"Don't laugh. Don't laugh. Don't laugh. He willed himself, pursing his lips together in an unsuccessful attempt to swallow his smile."
-- Funny, I was doing the same thing at the exact moment since I'm still at work on lunch. PERFECT!

Also so great how they were completely busted, I reveled in the incredible mischevious and boyishness you chose to have Clark possess, especially when he flicked the band into her coffee, on purpose and punished her by holding Lois against his drenched shirt.

Wow, so short but so much enjoyable. I am completely humbled by your ability to do that!
RouthFan
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
This was such a cute bit of fluff to read, I loved it! Where Clark threatened to drop her was great. Had to control myself and not laugh out loud, have a slight break at work and people may think I'm nuts...hope you can peak at this again and maybe fix a few glaring typos though. Will read the other when I get the chance. Back to work for now!
Severus-is-my-man5690
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
u should have perry find out clark is superman from that instance! MOGOGMGOM!OGMGOMGMO!!
gab4eva24
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
Fun stuff! I sometimes don't like fluff but this was so funny just them messing around. The icing on the cake was having Perry come in! Haha. Clark and his thoughts of "Don't laugh. Don't laugh," were great. You always show them at there greatest in the way you portray these Clois moments. Perry's smile at the end was not surprising since I've read stories like this, but it's always necessary in a moment like this. Good work! This was a definitely fun bullpen moment. Hope you UPDATE very very very SOON!!
beauty7890102
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
KlynneL
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Such a sweet picture you painted here. I bow to your artistic prowess. I look forward to more.
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