Very cute. :D This is the way Romeo and Juliet should have ended - it's a shame Shakespeare was a sadistic bitch. xD Still, this reminds me of a Sora/Riku Love Story AMV I saw on youtube once. <3

Apart from the few grammar errors and such, this was very well written. ^_^ Cute little oneshot was what I needed.

D'aw
I like how you used "Love Story" as the general idea for the story but branched out on your own. x3
At the end all I could hear is that one part of the song thats like "but I got tired of waiting, wondering if you were ever coming around. My faith in you was fading, when I met you on the outskirts of town"
O:
And the fact that those lines are my favorite part of the song helped me, I'm sure
But ANYWAYS
I loved it :D

Aw~. I adored this~. I was so afraid of this would but but I liked the ending! It would be so cool to see a sequel to this~.

aww~! haha, if I was Sora when his dad was yelling him for being with Riku, i would be like:

"So wait a sec- your yelling at me for loving a Tanaka, not because he's a Guy? Jeez."

XD Soriku fluff hehe :)

I liked it, it was so soft and fairy-tale like :)

Aw Romeo and Juliet...please don't follow the plot precisely..especially ya know that one little nasty bit at the end, where they DIE. Cute read, and much easier to understand. Keep up the good work

~Tangerine

you really could have turned this into story, it could have been very good. You could always make a sequal story with length, like their lives in five years.