Aw short and sweet. Great job and good luck.

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony

The story went too fast dont you think?

this was very cutee: D

that was super cute! i just wish it had the dialogue between sakura and sasuke you know? but other than that it was great!

simple and clean, i liked it, :D

Cute. And well-written. Very clear. ;)

collide? i love that song! ! ! !

i like this! it's cute!

This just adorable.

And I believe it's the beginnings that matter too, so this is just what I've been craving. A short, sweet, SasuSaku oneshot. Especially since the manga itself has been... much less than satiating.

Thanks for this little boost in my SasuSaku drive.

C

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Cute, simple and sweet!

I agree with you on how fics need to be written about the beginnings, but I think so often people ignore the middle. I'd like to see a fic, a realistic fic, written about 7 years after Sakura and Sasuke get together. Because that, honestly, is when relationships are tested. And those sorts of fics are pretty hard to find (actually, I'm not sure if I've found one yet). Not saying your fics about the beginning aren't amazing (because they are VERY awesome), but just observing that the middle is important too. Ah, well. Anyways, great fic!

it's so cute!

Wow! I was actually listening to Collide by Howie Day while I was reading this :D Yes, the beginnings are important aren't they? ;P And I love Naruto in here - its just the way he is, the firm pillar of support whenever all of Team 7 threatens to crumble...

LOVE IT!

And the title of this short story is the SECOND line from Howie David's song Collide )

Love that line

Love that song

Love Howie David

And most of all...

LOVE THIS STORY!

awesome-ness

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It's a little too 'innocent' for my taste, I ussually prefer something 'stronger', like the T ranked compositions. However, you're right. Something 'innocent' should have been the biginning to all Romantic sotries about this couple.

This sory would be a very good biginning for something bigger. A pitty it's only a oneshot.