HOLY shit! izzy is a baddy!!?!?! *cry* and i liked her too!! oh well lets see what happens

Three in french is spelled trois not twois.

Whens the next chapter?

wow. THis is strangely addictive. Very strangely addictive. Loved it, read it all, want more.

WOW. what can i say? You are an amazing writer who has an exceptional imagination- your description of the setting and the characters is truly inspiring. Your attention to detail is astounding!I AM WELL AND TRULY HOOKED! please keep going as i am anxious to find out what happens!! I also really loved the bombshell about Isabelle! i never saw it coming...keep up the good work!

*is happy*
It's always nice when writers listen, and are willing to admit mistakes :)

Don't worry about it though, I bet most people didn't know it anyway. General idea is that people in the medieval era wore corsets, while it was actually in fashion to be... Er, fat. It the Romantisicm's fault, really. They made all those stories about medieval times and they just stuck in people's heads.

(also, DreamCloud93, it isn't, but with a corset on I can easily cinch it to that size. I've been wearing corsets for a pretty long while)

But, yeah, I've read the entire story now and I totally love Leo xD He's so hilarious, definitely my favorite character. Assassin's Creed fandom needs more humour, seriously xD

wow! your waist is 18 inches around?!

Err, I normally don't review, but here I couldn't resist...
See, you made a mistake (a common one, but it still bothers me to no end). I like your story, honestly (although it's a bit distracting to read in bold), but the corset scene sort of bothered me. In the 15th century, during the Renaissance, there were no corsets.

The first corsets appeared in the 16th century, and they were not meant to emphasize curves. These corsets were called 'pair of bodies (Bodice)' and later in the 17/18th century became known as 'stays'. They were meant to flatten the bust and show of only the curving top of the breasts, but these vecame a common-to-wear garment around 1550, about 100 years after the game happens.
The term ´corset´ itself is a Victorian , that´s the one you´re thinking of. The sort that creates an hourglassfigure.

Also, as someone who's worn corsets from all centuries (and still wears a 1870's styled underbust on daily base), corsets are not at all uncomfortable. If it's uncomfortable it's to small for you. Even if the corset is small (making your waist say... 18", as is mine), it still wont hurt because of the 'waist-training'. No one in their right minds (especially not when corsets were common) would have worn a corset at it's tightest immediately (partly because, well, they grew up wearing those things. They're not uncomfortable anymore).
Sorry for the minirant, I´m just a little... Corset-obsessed I suppose.

So far the story seems nice, though she does seem a bit Mary Sue with the Rebelious Princess syndrome. Totally lv her father though, wish my dad were that awesome XD

Loved the story, can't wait to read more. :)

O, suspense.

I sense a love semi triangle.

I think Isaac's going to want Rose for his own. Greedy idiot.

Love, Love, love it!! And I SO knew Isabella was a dude! (After he said 'You knew?') I was like 'HOLY C*P!! It's a dude0o0' *coughs* Anywho! Like I said, I loved it! And I can't wait for the next Arc! (I also can't wait for AC2 to come out!>-<)

Dude, I love Leo! He's so freakin' funny! He kinda reminds me of Carl from Van Helsing, lol.

I'm impressed. I never would have thought about making a story based only on a trailer. I was a little worried at first, but this is already turning into a story I know I'll love.

Poor Ezio, being shot down by Rose like that. She has spunk- I like it!.

Off to continue reading!

Story is great. Ive read through once or twice and didn't find any spelling errors or anything bad worth remembering. Love the way you displayed Leo and described the scenery. Wish there was a few more chapters but that's always what I want with the good stories...
Keep writing and if you could let me know about any new chapters, add-ons or any new story. Your a terrific writer by my standards and i would love to read more from you. I haven't combed your profile to see if there are any other interesting stories but maybe ill do such later.

Sincerly yours,
Sergei

this is a really good story