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Elodie Wolfe
2009-11-19 . chapter 2
Hot damn. I liked that, liked it a lott. :D
Elodie~
Emerald Imagination
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
Loved the concept for the story! While I do love jealous Gibbs, protective Abby is just as good. Amazing!
Harmne
2009-11-12 . chapter 2
LOL, cute story! It had me smiling. I'm not sure I can see Gibbs losing control of things like that - although with all those wives/divorces, maybe so! - but Abby is spot on! I loved the last little tease!
alix33
2009-10-28 . chapter 2
"She’s teasing me, and it doesn’t help to know that underneath that tiny skirt, she’s not wearing any underwear…" - Which means any spare underwear she might or might not don once she is back in her lab, had better be pretty minuscule too...
Totally cool ending, especially the bit where DiNozzo got reamed a new one for gossiping.
alix33
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
"I make polite conversation, smiling and nodding where appropriate, but Charlie either doesn’t read the signs or has decided to ignore them." - EW! Yes, that woman did not learn that particular variant of sign language, ever! Poor Little tease's sir, I'm cringing on his behalf!
"She spots me, and a slow smile spreads across her face. Doubtless Tony and Kate have been gossiping about the situation, and she tilts her head a little to analyse Charlie." - You are now officially living on borrowed time, sheriff!
“Good to meet you,” Abby says, rounding the table and taking a seat… in my lap." - YOU GO, Little tease!
"she directs her next words toward the Sheriff. “So how’d you meet my boy?” Charlie blinks dumbly at us, dismayed. If it wasn’t for the fact that she’s clearly interested in more than a cafeteria sandwich, I’d almost feel bad for her." - Yay for little tease, IMO!
“Coming up on five years,” I answer, and Abby shoots me a delighted glance. “You remember the date we met? That’s so sweet!” Before I can anticipate her next move, she kisses me full on the mouth, her lips lingering for a couple of seconds longer than appropriate under the circumstances. My instincts override my common sense, and I can’t stop myself from kissing back, enjoying the slight quiver that runs through her body in response." - Yay for little tease AND her sir!
Oh God, PLEASE don't let it be the sheriff catching them (or, wait, let it be the sheriff...)
Miss Barbara
2009-10-26 . chapter 2
Pfoe that was really hot!
tricks-meuler
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Goddamn perfect. Funny and hot in all the right places and I love that at the end their interaction is back to normal like we'd never notice the difference.
Audacious
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
OH GOD YOU MEAN THATS IT?!?!? lolol awesome way to end it. i forgive you for taking awhile, that just means i had to re-read chapter 1... te! -audacious
STLFAN
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Nicely done. I think this deserves a sequal, picking up at Abby's apartment. But only after you complete some others.
Neutrona
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Loved it!

Thanks for finishing this part. Hope you eventually write what happens at her place that night!

Neutrona
ascifigirl
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
What a fun story. Thanks for sharing.
KellyRoxton
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
I could so see his reaction to that statement... Sighs.. Exasperation :) GREAT job write more soon. Hugs and lotsa love.. me
TeamJacob88
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
That was totally worth the wait *gg* Hot.. like usual :)
finlaure
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Oh crap that was just to hot to be comfortable to read in Any kind of company, I'll have to read this again later,, and over and over and over. After you finish 'Between life and Death' could you PLEASE do a sequel or add another chapter where Gibbs corners Abby in her apartment that night... that story/chapter would be just To good. Please Please
RebeccaInley
2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Oh can't we pretty please have a POW sequel? Great job! I loved it!
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