Oh! It's just to beautiful! I love this chapter so much! Heck, I love this entire story! Please make more! It's too cute! I can't wait to read some Creek action! 8D

haha, Mizuni-no-neko is very cool, she's possibley one of the best creek/dip writters on FF.

your story is absolutly fantastic! i'm adoring it so far. i love that craig thinks tweek is dead and poor gregory is worried about cristophe. oh! i adore the K2 an Dip in here as well. you have all my fave couples! a perfect story!

ZOMBEH FIGHTS NOW! >.<

I think more emotional detail could be added to lengthen the chapters and add more depth. Also, more dialouge would be ideal.

Needs more zombies! I LOVE ZOMBIES!!

I'm thinking that alot of these chapters could be combined into one long one with different scenes. >.>