Had some nice moments. I especially liked the shopping cart threat at the end - sounded a bit Whedon-esque in a good way (is there a bad way?) "Excitedly bouncing on her toes," however, seems more Dinah than Helena. Altogether, a fun read!

Giant box of poptarts. Some how I can see that happening. Helena getting all excited though I'm left wodering and trying to figure out exactly what Barbara might have come up with to do to the human body with shopping carts. Hm let me count the ways.

Excellent story, for a humorous piece it sure packs a punch. The basic scenario is hilarious, Hel & her pop tarts, Barbara expecting the worst etc. But it covers a thoughtful exploration of their individual frustrations with the way things have changed since 'that night'.

My only nit pick would be that Helena kind of comes across as a bit too 'young' at places, I had initially assumed it was a scene from relatively early on in their Huntress/Oracle relationship so the bit about Dinah was unexpected... but other than that it is a good characterisation

well done and thanks for sharing