 kpfan72491 2009-09-08 . chapter 7please update soon :) |
 robins princess starfire 2009-07-27 . chapter 7 Oh cool not bad at all. I'll be keeping an eye on this story for sure. UPdate soon please! |
 Alice Shade 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Normally, I don`t leave reviews over a single nitpick, but that blunder stuck out... well, like a sore thumb.
I`m referring to "Helga was being home schooled since the American school system was far more advanced than the Italians.", of course. It`s no secret that American schools are barely adequate for their tasks, let alone "far more advanced". Especially so, public schools.
Granted, Helga would have to be home-schooled indeed, but simply to catch up on necessary subjects she`d be expected to know in italian school. |
 Phantom Amethyst 2009-07-11 . chapter 7Good chapter!
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 acosta perez jose ramiro 2009-07-11 . chapter 7Very good; yeah, it's nice that Arnold can get some advice once in a while. He does so much for everyone else he deserves it.
Keep the good writing. |
 Sokai 2009-07-10 . chapter 6Bleh...a POV change...not liking it at all... I liked/preferred it mainly in Arnold's POV...not to mention it's a tad late to go all the way back to the beginning, and give Helga's side. Probably would've been best to just split it in that particular chapter, then, if you were gonna do that.
Meh...now I'm scared for the rest of the story, if it's gonna be more of Helga and her thoughts. I love the girl, but I'm kinda fed up with those stories. LoL I want/like Arnold and knowing his thoughts for once, damn it!! LoL ~_~
Anyway, I hope the next chapter's Arnold again. ^_^ Oh, and no big on the no immediate reply; I didn't reply to YOU immediately, although only b/c I've been busy, sadly. ~_~
*Waves* |
 Forevermusicfairy8295 2009-07-10 . chapter 1Wow.. that's crazy!!
You could see Helga being super pretty when she gets older because she was never ugly to begin with...
This time Arnold is swooning over her...
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 Sokai 2009-07-05 . chapter 5Nice chapter, although I hope I get a reply this time... |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2009-07-05 . chapter 5Haha... Helga doesn't change.
Keep the good writing. |
 Phantom Amethyst 2009-07-04 . chapter 5I'm reviewing for all three new chappies, so listen up. Great, awesome and cute!
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 acosta perez jose ramiro 2009-07-04 . chapter 4Very good scenes with Helga and Arnold. Funny how she still has the same temper, something that should scare away boys, but she's also so pretty she keeps attracting them.
Keep the good writing. |
 SilveryMoons 2009-07-04 . chapter 4I really like where you're going with this. (: HxA is by far my favorite pairing, but I can't help but like the idea of Arnold sweating a little, haha. Please continue soon! |
 Sokai 2009-07-04 . chapter 4LoL That movie was pretty funny, though, even though most others seem to think otherwise. Especially the shower fun, omg. ^_^'
Anyway! This story isn't bad so far, not at all. MAINLY, in my opinion, anyway, because most of the chapters are mainly Arnold-centric and his feelings for Helga, which I like to see (but DON'T see a lot of, sadly). Usually it's mainly chapters featuring Helga's thoughts/feelings, which is fine, yea, but we all already and have always known how she feels for him, even IF the author ages her, or makes her not like him like that anymore or not so much or what have you, etc.
It's nice to see the OTHER side, since we as viewers of the show hadn't really gotten to see that a whole lot. ^_^
So, that being said, hint hint, I really, really, REALLY hope you continue to keep it mainly Arnold-centric, feelings/thoughts wise, and continue to have HIM be the brooding/sad one for a change, AND hopefully will keep Helga basically indifferent to Arnold in terms of feelings. OBVIOUSLY she'll like him/be with him in the end of your story, duh, lol, but for now, and hopefully for a WHILE (to make it extra worth reading, in terms of further angst and heartbrokeness for Arnold ^_^), you'll keep it this way, with her just mainly interested in rekindling her kinda lost friendships with everyone. ^_^
Oh, and also digging her being so gotdanged popular. ^_^ Usually it's Lila who's popular, and then also with Arnold while a simultaneous undercover ** and/or b.tch in a LOT of people's stories on here. ^_^ Nice to see a change (at least, where the popularity is concerned, and who is). :)
Continue on, and don't change a THING...or I will KILL you...^_^ |
 EJ 2009-07-03 . chapter 4 Yeah,Arnold should sweat some.
good story. |
 PokeshippersShadow1 2009-07-03 . chapter 4Nice chapter! Please update soon! |
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