This is so good. I love the way you're going and thanks for putting in my advise if that's what you were thinking when you wrote the bedroom scene. Nice how you put Manning in his place, I never did like him, "Mr. Authority". It makes me so happy you updated so soon.

Okay, you're the first person I'm telling so listen if your interested in a Christmas oneshot. I'm writing one called The Best Gift for Christmas. It's mostly about Nuada and Nuala but I think you're going to love it. I'm posting it on Christmas so don't forget (and I hope I don't either, haha).

LOL manning is such a jerk - but at least we know now that she can do more than just lift things, i wonder what the true extent of her new power is - i mean if a little annoyance shatters metal, what is she capable of when abe´s life is threatened?

that's wicked kick ass!

Raine

*sqeelly happiness* YAYS! THEY'RE TOGETHER AND HAPPY!

OH. MY. MOTHER-F*CKING. GOD.

WRITE MORE! I NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! pleze?

so one of the recently set free powers choose adriana even though she was already 'taken' - i just knew that setting free all those powers at once would cause trouble! now it seems as if she´s lost her original ability which is surely not nice no matter how strong/great her new ability might be, she was so used to paper mastery, with her love for books+all you could say it was a part of her personality,plus it was partly her paper stuff what brought her+abe together,i hope she´ll cope with the loss - or that abe will find a way to catch+return her power, and maybe harmonize it with the other(or kick the new one out)otherwise i say there will be trouble, a new powerful ability which she can´t control at all, that doesn´t sound too good to me...

i hope she gets her memory back, hearing about Abe like that made me want to cry (Abe is my favorite)

Raine

Yo people! Review! I need to see what happens next! i NEED TO! Great work! I like it! Please hurry and yes people, I am also talking to you!

I thought it was excellent. For ideas, I think you should have them in a regular routine for awhile, like a week, then go on a mission and the ability thief kidnaps Adrianna. He tries to get her to love him and willingly give him her power (aka letting him kill her). She could suffer another memory loss but it's by a potion he made and he almost succeeds but Abe comes and has her memory returned when they sleep together back at the Bureau after nothing else has worked and feelings are aroused. It's just something to consider.

*Happy Dance!* Abes all happy again! So sorry I haven't commented in a while, I haven't been online lol
Still in love with this fic! It's amazing... But for ideas of what to do next... I'm not sure, sorry):
But please, please, please keep writing!(:

what a way to remember!

Raine

thank goodness she remembers! as for how you could go on...well, there aren´t exactly many loose threats remaining you could continue from, only maybe all the powers that got released as the baddie died, given that her power obviously has a mind of its own - defending its host - who knows what chaos the homeless powers could cause before finding new hosts...oh, and how the bad one got to know of adriana+where to find her (mole/traitor inside the bprd?)

Yay!! Hooray for Adriana!! She her memory back!! I like the on how she got it back, it's sweet. Hm...suggestions hey? Ep, erm...ooh, what about Prince Nuada and Princess Nuala's resurrection? And they all try to find out how they came back, ever since they left their remains where the Golden Army were. Oh and also there are complications between Abe, Nuala and Adriana. :) Hows that? Oh and also I forgot to mention, you forgot Krauss!!

Ep!! I need to find out what happens next!! Hurry!! Please update soon!! I like the twist!!

*censored* i hate cliffies! don´t you dare to not give her her memories back - just when she had realized that she loves abe! and i´m really curious about how she suddenly defeated that guy...those glowing eyes...somehow i don´t think it was adriana who did it, more that she was sort of possessed by some higher being who gave the bad guy what he deserved.