Wow...Elena turned out to be quiite the biiotch..._

So I know this is an AU, but I feel like the characterization is too off to ignore. Reno does not seem at all like his cocky self. Tifa is watered down. Elena is a bitch for some inexplicable reason. And Yuffie is motivated by...What? I feel like an AU has to have at least some truthfulness to the original characters or it just shouldn't be bothered with.

You also seem to have a problem with grammar/tenses/typos that makes me want to believe that you don't proofread before you post. If you're interested, I can point out some specific places, so let me know.

Thanks for the simplistic nature at least. I liked the way I knew what was going on and had a very concise picture of the events in my head. It was just off because of the problems and the super sweet premise that didn't make sense with the characters.

I thought I'd already reviewed this :S Anyway, loved this! Really liked the mean Elena, and how you had Reno and Tifa's relationship developed XD Oh and your request will be out tomorrow!

really cute! nice fic. good conflict there too and the fluff.

I LOVED THIS! It wasn't rushed at all, it was amazing. I loved the fact that Elena was the evil girlfriend...and VERY cute ending! Thanks so much for writing it for me! I'll have your request for you soon!

Concrit:

'every time she looked around the room she was currently in it returned.' - Insert a comma between 'in' and 'it' to break the sentence down a bit.

'now that she was graduated' - 'now that she had graduated'

'at a moments notice' - 'moment's'

'photographer's followed' - No need for an apostrophe when you're talking about a group of people performing the same activity, 'photographers followed'.

This was really sweet :). It could have used a bit more detail in some places but it was still good.

Relena freaks can cry reading this LOL

But I'm not one of them