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Reviews for: With Tongue
awkward-flyingfish
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
yo
read two of your dgm stories, and i simply love the way you write. it's fun reading, and i hear lavis voice in my head whenever i read a new sentence. you are fantastic.
adiosyesterday
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Well, this is just gorgeous.
What is up with you, always with the
Kuro666
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
I seriously was way too busy with the RK fest. to notice this but now I am totally obsessed with your RK works! *u* Not the usual just for laughs fics (that you do so well), this is more like the deep mellow love fics (that you also do oh-so-well~)!

Fav. line: "Kanda loved part Forty-Nine of a story that has lived eighteen years. And Lavi, he loved Kanda's voice and palms and navel and cheek and hipbone." I love your concept of Rabi loving Kanda in bits and pieces that Bookman had no restrictions over, he seems like the type of guy who knows the rules by heart and work around it for his own beneficial reasons XD

You work magic with these two~ v I can't wait for more of your RabiYuu works :)

Kuro~
lordvio
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Um...I am amazed... God, why aren't you writing more D. Gray Man stories?! *Weeps* I am an abominable fan of Yuulen, but your stories make me love LaviXYuu pairing. Really beautiful...
me, who else
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
omg
omgomgomgyou published this!
and didn't tell me
*should feel betrayed?*


gods, i said it once and i'll say it again, i love lavidenial <3
Elisya
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Loved it, really.
You succedeed in telling exactly Lavi's perspective.

Even if we - poor fans XD - pretend to think he can love like any other man, he can't ;__; Truth hurts, as they say.

Amazing job ^_^

~Lisya
a malachite maiden
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
doncha just love when you write a review to a totally amazing author and your internet decides to just die right there?
because i know i do. /sarcasm

anywho, that was just wonderful!
lavi would think about it like that. it's just a good thing that he's smart or else he might never have thought of that little loophole and i wouldn't be able to enjoy this lil drabble.
or it's a good thing that you're smart so you could make him smart??
Shinigami's Voice
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Very very good. It is poignant and raw and speaks volumes of what Lavi's perspective could be.

I like it very much, and I am actually surprised it has so few reviews *sighs* But the fandom is very quiet lately, surely gone cold due to the long hiatus.

So few people are reviewing, such a pity.

I like the fact that Lavi is trying to cheat himself, loving Kanda by parts because he still feels tied to his fate of being a Bookman and thus, not allowed to love in "wholes". So he loves by halves, which is so Lavi-ly stupid because anyway he loves Kanda.

*pats Lavi*

And Kanda is never one to do things by halves (he dies completely each time, so hey, he is a guy who gives his everything) so even if he loves this 49 personality, I bet once he makes his mind, he will say 'f-ck it' and love the whole past masks too.

*whistles* Long review is long, or what? XD
simply anonymous
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
interesting.. ^^
Joyce
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
lolwhat and angstangstangst D;

It really does seems very Bookman not to care about the important things, like people :D. And hitory... they dedicate themselves to history, not tangiable, so totally makes sense. LOVE TO OBJECTS!
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