|Reviews for Break|
| KitKNine 2 years later 6/28/11 . chapter 7
Lol hi Sil I know I have not reviewed in a while (two years have passed thats longer than a while) but your story wouldn't get outta my head so I thought I'd pay a visit. I'm all grown up now (13 is so not grown up) well I stopped staying awake for days at a time and I stopped eating candy for the sugar rush. I looked back on the reviews I posted and thought dang I really must have been on a sugar high. Anyway I just stopped by to say hi.
ps:I made an account and my username is MaryTheGravityWitch Mary is actually my real name by the way.
| Ashura 6/7/11 . chapter 7
I really do hope you do continue this story. It is one of the few good stories on in the ssbb section.
| nameisDooM 11/4/10 . chapter 7
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| kit k 9 8/17/10 . chapter 6
no more sugar for me im of the stuff love the chapter cant wait for the next chap although i can see how you get writers block writing this epic piece of art
ps see how ive matured
| MidnightMoon16 7/8/10 . chapter 6
lazy to log in as usual :P
NOOO MARTH IS GONE! YOU MUST BRING HIM BACK! D:
| nameisDooM 6/21/10 . chapter 6
YES! You speak the truth! A great update, lets see if this continues... Tor is cool, I like his personality... umm, Torin's personality? Are they the same person? ... I confoozed...
| AlexanderLynAngelic 6/16/10 . chapter 6
I know I probably said this in every reply but yay update XD Either way,glad I can look forward to some updates from here. Keep going! X3
| AlteaAuroraRia 6/15/10 . chapter 6
Yeah, the update was kind of long... but the chapter kind of made up for though... :3
Poor Marth. I hope Samus gets himback soon... :O
Tor is really funny too ;)
| mrtysh 6/15/10 . chapter 6
I actually squealed xDDD A NEW CHAPTER! D
I really liked it! I liked the action :3 You write well :) And I like your OC's being a part of it; it helps me to understand them a lot better xD Great job! D
| ElementUchihaMaster 6/15/10 . chapter 6
Nice job! _
| nameisDooM 1/24/10 . chapter 5
yes. yes there are manny mistakes, and im to lazy to list them. But thank god your updating! im looking forwerd to more!
| ElementUchihaMaster 1/23/10 . chapter 5
awesome job. i am interested in the trippy self of torin xD
| AlexanderLynAngelic 1/23/10 . chapter 5
Yeah update! XD Now I'm thinking of reading the first one because of Marth mentioning it. Good job! Cant wait to see next chapter.
| mrtysh 1/23/10 . chapter 5
YAY it has officially been written! D I LOVED it! Poor Tory. I can't wait to read the rest of it and see more art! D
| mrtysh 11/14/09 . chapter 4
I'm glad my reviews mean SOMETHING.
I thought the whole scene when Torin came in there and Sar called him tall and then said Roy was short and the 'person' kept making mischeif... I thought that was HILARIOUS (I think it was Marth and Samus thwacked him... Good times!)
If my hunch above is correct, then you achieved some cute, funny fluff. I REALLY hope there will be more of that, it's my favorite!
mrtysh D (Keep it up! D)