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KitKNine 2 years later 6/28/11 . chapter 7 Lol hi Sil I know I have not reviewed in a while (two years have passed thats longer than a while) but your story wouldn't get outta my head so I thought I'd pay a visit. I'm all grown up now (13 is so not grown up) well I stopped staying awake for days at a time and I stopped eating candy for the sugar rush. I looked back on the reviews I posted and thought dang I really must have been on a sugar high. Anyway I just stopped by to say hi. ps:I made an account and my username is MaryTheGravityWitch Mary is actually my real name by the way. |
Ashura 6/7/11 . chapter 7 I really do hope you do continue this story. It is one of the few good stories on in the ssbb section. |
nameisDooM 11/4/10 . chapter 7 . . . |
kit k 9 8/17/10 . chapter 6 no more sugar for me im of the stuff love the chapter cant wait for the next chap although i can see how you get writers block writing this epic piece of art ps see how ive matured |
MidnightMoon16 7/8/10 . chapter 6 lazy to log in as usual :P NOOO MARTH IS GONE! YOU MUST BRING HIM BACK! D: |
nameisDooM 6/21/10 . chapter 6 YES! You speak the truth! A great update, lets see if this continues... Tor is cool, I like his personality... umm, Torin's personality? Are they the same person? ... I confoozed... |
AlexanderLynAngelic 6/16/10 . chapter 6I know I probably said this in every reply but yay update XD Either way,glad I can look forward to some updates from here. Keep going! X3 |
AlteaAuroraRia 6/15/10 . chapter 6Yeah, the update was kind of long... but the chapter kind of made up for though... :3 Poor Marth. I hope Samus gets himback soon... :O Tor is really funny too ;) Update soon! |
mrtysh 6/15/10 . chapter 6I actually squealed xDDD A NEW CHAPTER! D I really liked it! I liked the action :3 You write well :) And I like your OC's being a part of it; it helps me to understand them a lot better xD Great job! D mrtysh 0 |
ElementUchihaMaster 6/15/10 . chapter 6 Nice job! _ |
nameisDooM 1/24/10 . chapter 5 yes. yes there are manny mistakes, and im to lazy to list them. But thank god your updating! im looking forwerd to more! |
ElementUchihaMaster 1/23/10 . chapter 5awesome job. i am interested in the trippy self of torin xD |
AlexanderLynAngelic 1/23/10 . chapter 5Yeah update! XD Now I'm thinking of reading the first one because of Marth mentioning it. Good job! Cant wait to see next chapter. |
mrtysh 1/23/10 . chapter 5YAY it has officially been written! D I LOVED it! Poor Tory. I can't wait to read the rest of it and see more art! D mrtysh |
mrtysh 11/14/09 . chapter 4I'm glad my reviews mean SOMETHING. I thought the whole scene when Torin came in there and Sar called him tall and then said Roy was short and the 'person' kept making mischeif... I thought that was HILARIOUS (I think it was Marth and Samus thwacked him... Good times!) If my hunch above is correct, then you achieved some cute, funny fluff. I REALLY hope there will be more of that, it's my favorite! mrtysh D (Keep it up! D) |