If you add a new chapter u should add Mr Hector coming to the house as well.

I loved this story! I liked how the characters turned out, especially Kevin:)

Hm, what can I say? When I read the first chapter, and I expected Kelly to do more and actually protect Kevin like you said in the summary. Marv and Harry were ignored in favour of the hotel staff (Tim Curry especially). The ending was rushed and the epilogue seemed unrealistic to me. It was okay, but I was expecting more.

YAY! MORE! :D

The begining was awesome, but ITS SO FRIKING LONG. maybe one day I'll finish it, but till then, the begining is clear, funny, well-explaineed, interesting, and parallel to the original movie.

great story (the first one) bit long starting but thrilling humorous adventure

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i like thia story keep up lol

Ooh, this is a great ending! I like it. :)

Mom and Dad moved out of 671 Lincoln Blvd when Kevin turned 21, and now live in a quiet district in a smaller but still grand house. You might ask what happened to my many brothers and sisters? Well, Linnie got into Harvard and studied politics. She’s now a politician in downtown Chicago. Buzz ended up working in a Dunkin’ Donuts as he left school with no qualifications, (no surprise there) and Fuller, well, he was the biggest surprise of all, becoming a doctor and working in brain surgery.

The rest went off into various jobs, all enough to support Uncle Frank and Aunt Leslie in their retirement, who eventually moved to Paris with Uncle Rob and Aunt Georgette. The house they had rented in New York with the hope of refurbishing had been so badly damaged when Kevin had set up traps to catch The Sticky Bandits that they decided to give up and sell it to New York City Council. It still isn’t liveable after twenty four years!

Cedric and I, however, live in a posh apartment block on Fifth Avenue, it’s incredible, actually, so luxurious and fancy!

Suddenly the door opened and Kevin walked in, dusting the snow off his hat.

Ella paused for a moment and discreetly called upstairs to her children, who came running. Molly was clutching a Barbie doll to her chest and Stevie holding a toy truck in a vice like grip. Seeing Molly, Kevin swept her up into his arms and spun her around. He then put her down and kissed Ella on the cheek before turning to me.

“Hi Kelly, how’s things?”

“Fine thanks.” I replied, giving him a quick peck on the cheek and a hug. “I guess you heard about Cassie?”

“No?”

“She’s working at the Plaza Hotel, with old Mr Hector. Remember, Kev?”

Kevin smiled, and just for a moment I saw him as my cheeky ten year old brother, sulking because Buzz had eaten the biggest slice of birthday cake and stolen the decoration, and then when he had used Dad’s credit card to check into the Plaza…oh happy days.

Despite branding him a ‘loser’ Kevin certainly wasn’t. He had built his own home security company up bit by bit, and now he lived in a nice home in a good neighbourhood and drove a flashy new Ford.

Excellent story! I love it a lot. :)

Keep up your awesome, superb, creative writing! :)

hey Glindagirl,

i really enjoyed reading this, i love the stories you send me...hope you will continue to write more!

love ya!..Zoe green...3

Fantastic! We get to see it all from a different point of view, and I think you gave it a much better ending then the movie did.

Kelly and Kevin share a lot of traits, which reminds me of The Enola Holmes bookseries with Enola and Sherlock. That and this are both enjoyable and fun to read.

Ooh, brilliant! You should write a sequel about what happens after the movie ends when Kevin comes back to the Plaza.

Keep up your awesome writing! :)