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Reviews for: Can't Let It End This Way
Katrina
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Aw, very nice story! Wish it had happened :) Like the romance and the characterisation was really good. Hope you write more fic soon :)
Melody Rhapsody
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
This story is so sweet and heart-warming. Gio is as caring and lovable as always. Good job! It is short but very descriptive and detailed.
sparkysdreamer
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
OH Alana I love this and I also feel so sad, sad because I know that's how the character Gio would have felt as he left Betty..he would never have left her completely and yet the writers have moved him to another planet as if Betty was a crush...nah she was Truelove...Henry moved miles away...Gio went ...where? but you'd think he was dead and he lives by Betty as well...badly done ABC...badly done...I think as Freddy is a character actor as he walked away at the end it was as much his disappointment as Gio's and if those writers at ABC had got any sense they would have made Betty chase after him...Gio was Betty's white knight always and you've captured that beautifully...a man not a boy in her life ..
Foxy-E
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was your first fic?! It was awesome, I really liked it a lot! I love that Betty ran after him. And she finally realizes what a catch he is. I am really starting to feel the Getty love. I hope you decide to write some more stories!!
Maria7992
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Alana this was amazing!! wow you have no idea how much i enjoyed reading this!

"Then he leaned in and kissed her. A soft brush of his lips on hers, a promise that he would always be there. Whether it was as her friend or as something more, he wasn’t going to leave her."

aw this part just melted my heart! please tell me your going to continue writing i think your really good :)
starletlaur
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Aww this was lovely. This is how BSL should have been.
I love this part:
'As his van disappeared into the night, Betty was still standing there, staring at the spot the van had been parked in, zoning out into Betty Suarez Land. It was in that moment that she realised just how amazing Gio Rossi was. He was a man who confessed his heartbreak to her yet was able to absolve her of her actions that had torn him apart.

She knew in that moment that he was ‘The Guy’'.

Yay! This is the Betty we want, the one who finally realises she needs and wants Gio there. Because he always will be. Aww, just great :)
m1ssp1ggy
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
WOW! What a fantastic first story! Very well written Alana!
The embrace scene - *sighs* - perfect Getty moment! and the bit at the end, 'one phone call away...' and seals it with a kiss...aw...makes me feel in love all over again! hehe
Definitely hope to see more from you!
Livia55555G
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
"I’m always going to be here for you. I thought that you would have realised a long time ago that I would do absolutely anything for you. Hell, I would try my hardest to give you the world if you wanted it. So if you ever need me B, just tell me. I could try my hardest to tell you that I don’t want anything to do with you, don’t want to help you out. But we both know that I’d still end up helping you. I told you earlier that you always seem to pull me right back into your life...and I wouldn’t ever change that B." Aw, that's our guy. This is definitely how the episode Betty Suarez Land should have ended, and this is the guy Betty should have gone after all those months ago. Well, we know she didn't actually decide on that very afternoon that "She knew in that moment that he was ‘The Guy,'" but except for that last sentence, it still could be that she went to him to make sure he would still be her friend. It still could be that, unseen by us, they still talk as friends and that sometimes she visits him or asks for his advice. So maybe when her unfortunate (to put it kindly) relationship with Matt has played itself out, she will realize finally what she really needs and who she needs and know right where to find it. This was so sweet, Alana. Thanks for posting it and giving us all a bit of hope.
Beatrice Benedick
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Woah, Alana! you did it! This is so romantic. I'm in love.

"“God, I can be so melodramatic!” he conceded." That's you, Gio and that's why we love you!

I like how you described the moment Betty came running into Gio's arms. how he embraced her and how he didn't care for the cheese when he held her in his arms. The promise in a kiss... HE'S THE GUY!

Thanks for showing us how Betty Suarez Land should have been. How it should have ended. Thank you so much!
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