I loved this! It was nice to see the relationship developing between Sui and Ren and to get to see the infamous photo shoot. Filling in more detail on Jak's hospital stay was good too. It really anchored the story into the greater universe you've constructed.

lol X)

i have th song claendar girl in my head now, thanks.

LOL That said, HAHAHAHA that was a cool story. I liked it. It fills up the before part of when Jak gets the calendar. Keep it up!