*ROFL, i can just imagine everyone faces (sorry didn't review every chapter the story was to damn good to stop and review i wanted to keep reading)

Woe great story loved reading it. I have got a few questons if you don't mind.

Q1- What is in the nursery that made it so important .

Q2- Are mac and harm ur favourite charcters.

Great story lloved reading hope to read mor og your storys in the future.

hahaha, priceless!
Men don't read instructions... valid point there!

hahaha, how typical.
LOVE General Creswell, though, and how he covers up his eyes, roflmao!

hahaha, Harm is priceless, and I love that line Mac says about the navy and defense tactics, priceless!
Oh, just one thing, it's not Carpe de um, it's Carpe Diem (Seize the day)

aww, how perfect!
Harm is just so... cute!

Hahahaha! Oh, man! I just read all four chapters and I am laughing SO hard! This is great! I LOVE the title too...can ya send a Commander my way, please?

BTW - I was really LingOL and my sister thinks I'm nuts! Haha!

I see the firefighter who had no idea how to work a fire extinguisher made an appearance (; I think you should get that checked though, wouldn't want those firefighters to be the one teaching fire safety to the kids ! lol.

Anyway! Great update!
Looking forward to more (:

great story

I enjoyed this chapter,thanks!:)

Good story so far. I assume the best is yet to come.

Very cute and lovey lol! I think their adorable, seeing fireworks literally and figuratively!

too cute Holly hope you had a great 4th

Lovely, lovely, lovely and of course I want more! Much more!! Much much much more!!

I hope you're fine! Lots of greetings from Hamburg

That was cute... My fave part is how amazed Mac was that the Police Officer was reading instructions... Lol... I would have been amazed also... =o)) Loe the Sarcasam