this is fine and dandy, but I wish fer more Vio pwease :3

'INSTANT FRIENDSHIP!'
Your a genius. :p

new outlook on Hazel...but what abouts Vio?

YAY!
HAZELJERRIE MOMENT

awe!! they got names! now when do they go meet Plato?

hazels always hungry.
lol
when do we meet ze boys?

lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

short

what does alonzo need circulation for anyway?
and try to spell alonzo right when you switch to his POV.
is it melted popsicle time?
??

awe poor alonzo having to deal with the thought of liking a cat. Lol Jenny's good. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

I like the story so far.

Stupid Sarafina what makes her say that Violaunte will kill the kits? She asked for one, not all. Geez stupid cat, must be drunk...ya must be drunk.

Oh no what happened to you? I must find out!

awesome
i will tell my friends to read it
it was good
but
when u say u r gonna stay in a pov
stay there
dont switch to narrator

keep on giong sista! read chap. 3 of my story, guess who i made up names us? that's where u come in! lol, i guess aqua was asleep...good point! cya