I look forward to further exploration of the character's identity and crisis.

I'm disturbed by the "complete" label... It looks like a beginning of a great story to me. Please consider writing more of it.

Great job! :)

Well I was a bit disappointed that he fell for Allison so quickly. Doesn't speak of strong loyalty there, Or strong convictions either. I may have understood better if he already felt he could never have Cameron back in this future and he thought he would have to stay. However, I really did like how Catherine handled him.