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Reviews for: Master and Commander
ackbarfan
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
I look forward to further exploration of the character's identity and crisis.
Renderer
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
I'm disturbed by the "complete" label... It looks like a beginning of a great story to me. Please consider writing more of it.

Great job! :)
fairedust
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Well I was a bit disappointed that he fell for Allison so quickly. Doesn't speak of strong loyalty there, Or strong convictions either. I may have understood better if he already felt he could never have Cameron back in this future and he thought he would have to stay. However, I really did like how Catherine handled him.
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