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Stormbringer951
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Weird. And a more than slightly creepy pairing. Can't really align the image of innocent infant Savannah with your version.

Very intriguing, a nice start to this story. I hope to read more soon.
good
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
its a good start update soon
Mike
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
this shows potential. but it is leaving me utterly confused about the relationship between Savannah and john.
dc
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
ok strange lol don't know what more to say
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