Wow...just wow. I love it. The description was very well done; I got totally pulled in. Your writing style is excellent and I love the reference to The Raven. It's a rather different way of ending Tutu but I can't say I dislike it. Good job and keep up the good work ^_^

Epic. That's all I really have to say.

Wow, that is a really unique idea for a Princess Tutu fanfiction. Not to say that its bad, just unique and well done as far as I can tell. Your characterization was fine and the ending was fantastic! I liked the raven Mytho and Fakir's decent into madness, but the over all lack of Ahiru and Rue was saddening. But despite that...Good job anyway! Seven stars out of ten and welcome to the realm of Princess Tutu Fanfiction.

I love the concept behind this fic, it's a really interesting idea and really unique from a typical Tutu fanfic. For the most part it's executed really well, too, and it's really hard to tell what really happened in the end (which is what I think you were going for!). My only critique would be that the long, unpunctuated sentences made it a little confusing. I'm guessing you were trying to make it sound disturbing that way, but it pulled me out of the story a few times because I had to keep rereading some parts to figure out what it said. I think if it had appeared in just a few places of the fic it would've worked, but since it was used quite a bit I think it was too distracting.

But overall, I really enjoyed it! I hope you'll write more stuff for this fandom!