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Khammoun
2009-11-16 . chapter 3
God I hope he can do it in a week! I'm so happy I'm up to date with this again, I refused to read the continuation until I reread IF, and I'm happy I did. I had remembered a lot about the plot but those little details make all the difference.
:) hello, btw. This is my first review and it's already chapter 3! I'm still sucked into the story, just as much as I was back in January. I remembered why IF was one of my top favorite stories during the apple scene. :) it made me squirm! Haha!

Ok, Christine needs to buddout. Right now. She's already stirred up problems in Raoul's guilty little mind. I guess she's not so bad right now... I hate the way she keeps badmouthing the person who sure, may have decieved her, but he gave her an amazing voice! She could be a little more grateful and respect the "dead". Not that you should change her, her personality fts with the end of IF perfectly. Haha I actually liked her character at the beginning and middle of the story, but these things do happen. ;)
The Crazed Artist
2009-11-12 . chapter 3
Go away Christine! Just go away! Good lord you make me hate that woman so much sometimes. She better not mess this up, my brain will explode and hopefully the skull shrapnel kills her.

Poor Erik wants some loving and Raoul is being a twit about it? What else is new? Everyone says Erik is socially retarded but Raoul is is 'Love' retarded. Good lord he ponders way too much about this stuff. Just kiss the sad creature and let Erik be happy, okay Raoul?

Anyways I liked the party idea and I cannot wait till you get it written! I know you will make it amazing! Keep going yay!

Crazed_artist

(PS I am writing this while on a sugar high from cookie dough ice cream at 11:30 at night, so I'm a bit more crazy than the normal quota)
Vampiric Phantoms
2009-11-10 . chapter 3
Ooh, party! I really hope Erik does something very soon, and doesn't wait until the end of the week. They need to get over their pride and fears and just get together already. LOL
Kittendragon
2009-11-10 . chapter 3
Come on, Erik! Stop being so modest and just go for him! Ah! I really hope to see more soon! :)
whatevergirl
2009-11-09 . chapter 3
Aww, poor Erik. He doesn't seem to be having the best of times. Good chapter though! :
PuppetofDreams
2009-11-09 . chapter 3
Had almost forgotten this story existed, it's been a while. The plot's moving along quite well, considering it's only chapter three...though I wonder how much more patient Erik can be.
Vampiric Phantoms
2009-10-22 . chapter 2
Finally! ... Though I missed it for a while, I'm so happy to see the continuation! I can't wait for more.
taedium
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
I think I'm actually in love with Imaginary!Erik. Of course, I feel the same way about real Erik, but you know what I mean.

I can just imagine Erik's reaction if(when?) he found out that Raoul is talking to him when he drifts off like that. I doubt he'd be so annoyed.

Other notes: Phillipe should know better than to think Raoul is just some conquest for Erik, and I think he's seen the self-control Erik's had for however long he's been there, which by the way is unbelievable! I doubt I know anyone who could be around Raoul, thinking what Erik's thinking, AND manage to keep their hands to themselves for so long!

Also, kill the maid. She was delivering their food, there was absolutely no reason for her to call out or interrupt the conversation. I dislike her. Intensly.


~taedium
LePhantomessa
2009-09-14 . chapter 2
It is your fault that I am now much more favorable of this pairing. So I sternly ask you to update soon.
Grayanotoxin
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
Rosemaunt, I am missing your writing terribly. I'm in France for the next four months, and being here just puts me in the mood for some good PotA manlove. :) Whether it be RL issues or writer's block or both, I hope things work out for you soon, because nothing quite improves one's mood like well-written fiction. J'espère vous voir écrire à nouveau bientôt!

Zee
Existence's Bane
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
Better late than never. And a gorgeous and long chapter to begin with is lovely, as well. I love the interactions between Raoul and imaginary!Erik as well.

On another note, would you mind it terribly if I friended you on lj? For some reason my alerts for this site are ridiculously irrational.
Talenyn01
2009-07-31 . chapter 2
Cool sequel so far. But like you said: can we get to the good stuff already? There was enough of the drama and bashing of heads and of their stagnant relationship in Imaginary Friend.
Andi
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
I'm terrible at reviews. Just know that I loved this chapter and cant wait until the next one comes out. I'm glad Philippe got them moving a little.
PuppetofDreams
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
I have yet to inform you of how much I enjoy your portrayal of Philippe in this story. This is how I had always imagined him, so props on that.
The Crazed Artist
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
-Scolds Philippe- Be nice! Erik is socially retarded so he doesn't know these things!

Okay, Philippe is kind of scary at the end there.

Forget you! Saying you don't like this chapter, it's not your best but simply just the fact you're continuing this wonderful to my favorite story makes me feel like I am floating! I saw the alert email in my inbox and when my boyfriend looked at me he said "That author wrote another chapter didn't she...?" and all I could do was sigh happily.

I really want Erik and Raoul to get together already. I think maybe when you finish all your other stories you just need to do a story of them actually being together romantically from the beginning and just have the conflict be something else. It would be nice not having a heart attack of frustration due to them always dancing on the edge of their relationship.

Yay for continuation and here's a internet cookie for being amazing! -Gives you internet cookie-
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