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Reviews for: Aftermath
sharpie-doodle
2009-10-17 . chapter 2
Oh, this is a lovely look at how the destruction of Konoha would affect everyone- their home is gone, hundreds are dead, many more are injured, and yet the characters keep moving, keep going.

Your characterizations are spot on- especially Sakura's! I have to say, she's rather difficult to write in fics- many either choose to portray her as a Mary-Sue with Pink Hair, and others just wish to see her as a wimpy little brat. She is a it bratty, she has gotten powerful- but you really nailed what Sakura really is here. A ninja. I really enjoyed this fic!

Cheers!
-sharpie
Julie
2009-10-09 . chapter 2
Perfection <3

"Now you can only see the past."

Oh wow, that wrapped it up so well!
Kia Kelara
2009-10-05 . chapter 2
Well written and thought up chapters. Thanks!
Sinistera of the Akatsuki
2009-09-02 . chapter 2
update soon
Clearheart
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
Both chapters were very good. Nice use of description and creative projection of what could happen. ;)
Prescripto13
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Nicely done--an excellent "What if . . .?" to consider.
moderndayportia
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
A really promising start. I'll look forward to seeing more from you.
singeivoire
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
My dear, as always you are the win.
otherrealmwriter
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Nice fic here. :)
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