 Laurie43 2009-07-31 . chapter 3wow lily really is like 3+4 put together isn't she??
she sounds quite cool
can you update soon please |
 Inu-yokia- princess 2009-07-09 . chapter 2Pretty good. I personally liked it. Keep up the good work! |
 DarkXRachel 2009-07-07 . chapter 2Lol! Cute! I liked the "can you raise my allowance?" and the 2/5 singing. Kool! :) |
 Laurie43 2009-07-07 . chapter 23+4 are parents to 4 kids
aw
i take it only 1 of them is in knd
can't wait to find out bout others
update soon |
 Alex aka Numbuh 145362 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Time Travel? AWESOME! The story looks awesome so far! :) I'm your 5th reviewer... Sorry I didn't have time to read this sooner! Love the 2/5 that's going to happen! You know I do! :P Update SOON! :)
Numbuh 145362 |
 DarkXRachel 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Lol! I like it! I like Numbuh 106's line:
"106, and I'm just here. Hoagie dragged me to come and join."
Lol! Can't wait to find out how their parent's react. |
 blue-eyed-blonde12 2009-07-04 . chapter 1Can I beta for you? This needs a grammar and spelling overhaul, but other than that, looks okay. Can I please be your beta? |
 Laurie43 2009-07-04 . chapter 1Cool
please update soon cause i want them to find out that sector v is their parents :D |
 Little Chocolate Fishy 2009-07-03 . chapter 1hm..cool. I've always liked a good time travel story. please continue! |