Amazing! I hope you write more stories!

That was hysterical! You have a real talent for comedy! I don't know how you came up with half of those lines, but you had me howling several times. Keep up the great work!

If you giggled while writing this half as much as I did reading this, then I'm surpried it ever got finished. XD Your characterization is great! Tizzino's personality came across very strong, and you kept the canon characters true to the original as well. This would have made an amusing episode in the Anime, it's lengthed just right and written very much in the style of the episodes. I think your desctiprion on the visuals could have used a little more work though. If I hadn't seen your drawing on dA for this fic I might not have visualized their outrageous outfits very well. Your strong points are definatly characterization and focusing on action, emotions and dialogue. This was fun to read and resulted in a lot of blushing and giggling. I loved when Jet refused to strip, he was so embaressed it was cute! Al's hatred toward Tizzino was hilarious, and I'm totally not surprised that GB knows who the guy was. Really great job, I'm gonna have to keep an eye on your fanfics. ;)

Okay... do NOT drink soda while reading this. To funny and too cute. I loved it. You are one of the rare people who gets that word choice is what makes a story funny. I loved this so much; especially your creative, original character. My favorite line, '004 and 007 grabbed his arms, preventing further cyborg on stylist violence.' That knocked me out of my chair. Great job.