   lily moonlight
2009-07-04 . chapter 1I really, really like this! It's so sweet and lovely, and made me feel all happy after being grumpy :) And sneezing as well, but that's mainly due to horse dust and flowers... I hope you're soon feeling better. Colds are horrible any time of year. But the good thing is that this came out of it, still, I wish you a speedy recovery, and that's also as I hope for an update soon for HPTP! You made me feel so sorry for Stella here, even her hair hurt, I could imagine all the horrible feelings you get with a cold. I did love the image of Mac appearing in her apartment and cooking up soup, I would always be happy to see Mac appearing in my kitchen. Or anywhere else for that matter XD That was so funny too, as Stella goes armed with a phone XD I totally am with her about the ice cream, that's one of the fun things about being a grown up, being able to eat ice cream when you want to! I'd probably dodge the chicken soup. Wow, sorry, this review seems to be all about me! I really loved how you wrote it, and the final scene at the end topped it off perfectly! Flack was brilliant I could picture him saying it in a slightly gloating tone, about Mac kissing Stella, and then being mildly surprised at having hit on the truth :D His final comment was so great! More soon please! |
 tails123
2009-07-04 . chapter 1Wo! Only the perfect thing to a) come home from work to, and b) be the first I read in 8 days! 8 whole days without the internet (except a five minute period in which it worked), I was about commit! Sorry, your story, that's what I'm here for :) Oh, did I mention it's BRILLIANT!?!?! As soon as I read the summary, I figured you must have channeled (that looks like it's spelt wrong...) it from your own sickness. Get well soon D, we can'thave you sick :(
I'll reply to your email tonight. This fic was gorgeous; especially Flack picking up on it :D But I do love the image of Stella about to pummel him with the receiver; classic :)
T. |
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