just wanted to let you know this is amazing. beautiful even.I love every last thing about it.

I liked the way you set this story up; I felt I was in the dark for a bit until I realised that Lily was pregnant. Nicely done, not overwritten either :)

can you please update quiet summer
im terribly missing that story and its nearly a year since you've last updated ...
please please please tell me you haven't abandoned that story.
i hope not.. please update i've been going through the worst withdrawals ever ... lol joke but nah really please.

... well i'll be checking up on your page still hoping to see the updated date for quiet summer change... thanks

very interesting story! i really enjoyed the atypical twist on a cliche romance!

im confused.

That was terribly well written. I'm feeling quite envious right now :)

Wow I have never read a story like that, set up like this and I have got to admit it is appealing and it is interesting. I didn't expect your story to be like this but I actually liked it a lot XD I bet they can learn to grow and like each other. Sorry it had to be a mistake but I guess it all worked out in the end XD

Your style of writing is very different. Its cool. I dont really know what it is about it..I think it is that it has hardly any details. It is really direct. I like it. Good job :)
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i loved it =) i love the way you write. you have a way of pulling the reader in =) i think this is an amazing piece! reaaly REALLYY well written!!

I loved it. Fantastic writing. The idea was brilliant - because they were young when they had Harry, yeah? This could have definitely been the case. And, if not, it's still a great story because everyone can relate to something like this. There's always some kind of responsiblity that falls on you at the wrong time, but you make it work - because you have too.

anyway, you did a wonderful job. I really enjoyed it.

i liked this. very original and refreshing. great job!

I was entranced by this story. There were some things I didn't quite understand, but the beauty of the language kept it from being a hindrance.

This is an interesting take on how Harry came into being. I love it.

-Arnold-

I love your writing style- this was written so... elegantly is the word I think I'm going to use, because where Lily ended, James began. Their individual stories blended together very nicely. :)

Great job!

So good. I don't think you could write a bad story if you tried. You have such a talent. This story feels so real. Nothing seems exaggerated or melodramatic. Just raw. You have such a way with words that it's almost poetic. If you haven't written poetry, I think you should try it. Your prose is already bordering on poetry that I think you could do it well. So once again, great story. I truly look forward to everything you post and I hope you're able to update QS soon. Oh, and happy belated Fourth of July!

Something about this story just draws you in.
I loved it (: