 whiteKnight15 2009-11-07 . chapter 8Woa!Thet was a really good chapter. Please add more soon! |
 whiteKnight15 2009-11-01 . chapter 7Love it! Add more soon please! |
 Irual 2009-10-25 . chapter 7HI great chapter and I AM impressed that Frou Frou is still up and at em Poor captain though
I got the lady and the tramp scene and I figued out tony and joe but I was glad to see I was right
I will have to look up the forshadowing things
HUGS great story overall and really nice job working in all the other characters
Irual |
 Irual 2009-10-18 . chapter 6WOW I am really really liking this story and I think changing the suggested name and it's meaning worked out great. For future readers though you might want to reedit the previous chapters and change them all to Sin instead of Evil.
( sorry my german is non exsistant so I went with the English translation)
also great tie in with the aristocats and the notes you add about the original book are really interesting and a great addition to the story.
I would like to read the original book. could you tell me what it's title actually is and the original author?
great job! please consider me a fan!
Irual |
 DitzyMinx 2009-10-15 . chapter 6Heya hun, finally got around to finishing reading your story. I haven't watch 101 dalmations for years! It's nice to see a dalmation fic up. This is really good so far! keep up the good work!! x |
 whiteKnight15 2009-10-14 . chapter 6Love it!Add chapter 7 soon please! I cant wait to find out what happnes. Do you have a name picked out for "Mystery" |
 Kino Lala 2009-10-14 . chapter 6Yay, I got mentioned in the summary! :D |
 Kino Lala 2009-10-08 . chapter 5Übel is supposed to mean "badly" in German.
There is now a 101/102 Dalmatians category on this site (under the movies section). |
 whiteKnight15 2009-10-06 . chapter 5I love your story! Cant wait till chapter 6 is up! Add soon please! |
 Irual 2009-10-05 . chapter 5well I'm afraid I haven't read the book so I can't help you there but I HAVE learned something new tonight by reading this.
I look forward to chapter 6 with much anticipation and I hope you are doing fine and that you update soon since I can't wait to see where you take this doggie train ;-D
bye for now thanks again Irual |
 whiteKnight15 2009-10-03 . chapter 4Love it! Wow what indepted story telling! Add more soon please! |
 Irual 2009-10-03 . chapter 4this is really good and I am very impressed with the references to Dumbo and Lambert the sheepish lion
great tie ins and I DO hope Pongo and Perdita can come up with a good name.
but how will they train their pets?
LOL
great update
thankd for this
Irual |
 whiteKnight15 2009-09-28 . chapter 3Love it! Add more soon please! |
 E Yee 2009-09-09 . chapter 3 I was surprised to find this - expecting it not to be interesting at all, then found myself reading all of it, getting pulled in to the story. You are great at evoking feelings in the reader and should continue on! |
 saruno-kera123 2009-09-04 . chapter 3Aw, poor little golden eyed no name puppy T.T |