Yes, I like it very much. I like Dean's pov and now Alastair is smoked. But what's wrong with Sam? You can't leave us like that. Will you please continue it, ya know, I really wanna read the next part. Can you please. I'm begging.

Putting it on alert.

Love Ritu.

Aww Sam's just too broken and thinks Dean's dead. Baby's so weak, God, I wanna hug him tight and wipe his tears away. But now Dean's here, everything's gonna be okay now...right!!

cool.

Ritu.

You know what, I really hate that swan neck Alastair, he is so lowlife sob. I so hate that monster.

Thank God Sammy's breathing now. Dean's brought him back in rotation. I'm breathing now too. Intense chapter.

Ritu.

Oh Gosh, Sam's not breathing!! What...why...I mean...WTH!! Why isn't he breathing?? and Sammy's ears are bleeding...my God, he could be brain damaged?? By the way...who was that old friend??

Interesting chapter.
Ritu.

oouch, it really hurts. A bullet wound is not a matter of joke after all. And when Sam's like this...any minor pain can aggravate his own inner pain tenfold. Poor boy.

I really like your story,
Ritu.

Ahh, gunshot!! Not a good thing. Sammy's mental condition isn't well right now?? I'm getting scared. Need to read next chap asap.

Ritu.

Hey Allee,

Gosh...it's been so long since I've even read this...I forgot what it was about. Lol.

This chapter was wonderful sweety. Don't worry about it. I really loved seeing inside Dean's head. : ).

I look forward to more and I will try and get you your chapter back tomorrow...-crosses fingers-.

Love,
Kaylee.

P.S. I gave you your 54th review. Woop, Woop! So now it looks more awesome. <3.

Ok, this chapter was interesting. Dean killed Alastair? Wow, that was shocking.

Wonder if he and Sam had some sort of connection and that's why Sam passed...

Well, waiting for the next chapter. Keep going.

i like this chapter A LOT i cant wait to see more!! :0

WOAH!
This is intense. Hmm... I'm thinking Sam gets hurt but not killed. I want to hear more about what happened. I'm just guessing cause I know that you've already chosen. This is good!

Great chapter. Poor, poor Sam. He's so messed up right now, not truly knowing if Dean is really there. I feel so bad for him and for Dean. Can't wait to read more.

Cindy.

Awesome.

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And now, the real review. Ok, this story it's getting intense. I still believe, you're still making me believe that all this is Sam dreaming, but hey, I'll find out in the last chapter, right?

I definitively LOVED how Dean tried to comfort Sam, it was a very touching and lovely scene you wrote here, so congrats, because this far you've been doing a great job.

Did I like it? Um, no, not at all.

Simply?

I LOVED IT! Excelent work! And I hope the next chapter doesn't get too hard for you to write, and I hope it's nothing tragic that'll happen there. Read you later. Bye. And good luck!

Am loving the story so far...I vote NO for the death fic but angsty Dean is my favorite!

I really enjoyed this chapter. The angst was just splendid. I really hope Sammy begins to get better and become who he once was. I'm glad he has Dean on his side, supporting him every step of the way. : ). I look forward to so much more.

Love,
Kaylee

Great chapter hon. I know exactly how much the reviews help. They sometimes are the only things that keep me going. I'll be waiting for more. Take care.

Cindy.