Oh hon, any of us who are writers know what its like to lose the feel for your story. It's hard to get motivated again. Sometimes the best thing to do is back away, do something else for awhile or just take a break. I have the same problem all of the time, especially when I think my story is really beginning to suck. You take the time you need to get it the way you want it and don't worry so much. We'll be here. Great job on the Sam POV. Poor guy. Loved it.

Cindy

yes that was a good explanation as to why this was on hiatus but i hope for u to finish it becasue i want to know what dean and bobby do about sam. it also must suck to have writer block and i can't wait to see what u come up with next

I love the story, the chapter was great. please don't lose interest in the story. Authors sometimes just have to put a little distance between them and their stories to see the whole picture, to get new ideas and eventually to find the motivation and the desire to continue writing. As for me, I can wait, I'm patient and I'm sticking to you.

Oh god, it's really an intense chapter. I like Sam's pov, how he was feeling...really intense. Poor boy, though that Alasteir is smoked now, he trapped Sam in his head and now Sammy is seeing those horrible deaths again?? Don't know how much he could suffer. Thankfully Dean's there to help him. You should update early girl, I really wanna read the next chapter soon.

Love, Ritu.

Yes, I like it very much. I like Dean's pov and now Alastair is smoked. But what's wrong with Sam? You can't leave us like that. Will you please continue it, ya know, I really wanna read the next part. Can you please. I'm begging.

Putting it on alert.

Love Ritu.

Aww Sam's just too broken and thinks Dean's dead. Baby's so weak, God, I wanna hug him tight and wipe his tears away. But now Dean's here, everything's gonna be okay now...right!!

cool.

Ritu.

You know what, I really hate that swan neck Alastair, he is so lowlife sob. I so hate that monster.

Thank God Sammy's breathing now. Dean's brought him back in rotation. I'm breathing now too. Intense chapter.

Ritu.

Oh Gosh, Sam's not breathing!! What...why...I mean...WTH!! Why isn't he breathing?? and Sammy's ears are bleeding...my God, he could be brain damaged?? By the way...who was that old friend??

Interesting chapter.
Ritu.

oouch, it really hurts. A bullet wound is not a matter of joke after all. And when Sam's like this...any minor pain can aggravate his own inner pain tenfold. Poor boy.

I really like your story,
Ritu.

Ahh, gunshot!! Not a good thing. Sammy's mental condition isn't well right now?? I'm getting scared. Need to read next chap asap.

Ritu.

Hey Allee,

Gosh...it's been so long since I've even read this...I forgot what it was about. Lol.

This chapter was wonderful sweety. Don't worry about it. I really loved seeing inside Dean's head. : ).

I look forward to more and I will try and get you your chapter back tomorrow...-crosses fingers-.

Love,
Kaylee.

P.S. I gave you your 54th review. Woop, Woop! So now it looks more awesome. <3.

Ok, this chapter was interesting. Dean killed Alastair? Wow, that was shocking.

Wonder if he and Sam had some sort of connection and that's why Sam passed...

Well, waiting for the next chapter. Keep going.

i like this chapter A LOT i cant wait to see more!! :0

WOAH!
This is intense. Hmm... I'm thinking Sam gets hurt but not killed. I want to hear more about what happened. I'm just guessing cause I know that you've already chosen. This is good!

Great chapter. Poor, poor Sam. He's so messed up right now, not truly knowing if Dean is really there. I feel so bad for him and for Dean. Can't wait to read more.

Cindy.