 Jaka Tingkir 2009-07-04 . chapter 1This fic is surprisingly good! I'm a sucker for long one-shots, but I enjoyed the shared feeling of parenthood. Yes, you are right, Autobots and Decepticons had things in common, if only they stopped staring at the gaping differences and make peace.
I loved the moment Soundwave taught Blaster about easing a distressed Sparkling. It was truly a heart-warming moment. :)
Though, there were some spelling error like:
When the lives of his cassiticons hung in the balance, however, he could make an 'acception'.
'acception' should be spelled as 'exception'. But it was not major enough to ruin the best moments. I applauded you for this wonderful piece, and hope that you will write again. |