Finally! Someone takes a look from Crystal's POV! And you did it very good. keep it up, looking forward to the next installment.

It's good! Also, I like that Crystal,(and possibly Amber), is/are coming back.

Hmm, what an interesting chapter. I wonder just how this is gonna turn out... but I won't know until you write about it. ;P Hope to read more of this soon. And best of muses to you.

Signed,
-Wolfalona-

Wow, I've got nothing to say but to continue this story.

You? Suck at writing over sadness? You're kidding me?
You're so good at writing, describing and make the readers feel the characters emotions.
Trust me, I have or began to read nearly every Scooby stories here and you definitely count to the better authors.

The chapter is a very good one, like the first one. I have to admit, that I couldn't really like Crystal (probably cause she broke Shaggys heart), but you're on the best way to make me like her.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter :D.

Pia

Aw, poor Shaggy.
You're good at describing how sad he is.
And the story's generally good. I'm wondering what'll happen next...
Hoping you can update soon :D

Pia

Interesting how you incorporated elements from The Alien Invaders into this story. Always kinda wondered why they never reappeared.

What an intriguing story so far. Nowadays, it's rather difficult to find good SD fanfiction writers (with the exception of a few non-deserters and one newcomer or so) who can actually write. So far, you have attracted my interest not only in the title, but in the way you've written the begining of this story. I hope to read more soon, it is a very interesting piece so far and I would love to read more.

I must depart. But I hope to encounter you yet again very soon.
-Wolfalona-