Guh! That's all I have to say. That, and if I smoked, I'd need a cigarette right about now! Lol! What a Fourth of July celebration! Incredible.

wow that was nothing like your other story and I loved it. great writing and awesome sex scene, for a sec there I was like wow Rory's into the kink :)

Wow, that was so well written. A little graphic for me, but still really good. Thanks for writing it, Nate.

I liked this story.